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Kfuchoin
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Joined: 11 March 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 740 |
![]() Topic: The Ol' good KilikPosted: 13 May 2008 at 6:32pm |
![]() used pokemon pallet should I use my own colors? should i change anything?so anyway critics and Comments all are appreciated |
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may the pixels be with you..
~Kfuchoin eMo looking for people for an RPG info: http://www.pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=4903 |
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Shougi
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Joined: 08 May 2026 Online Status: Offline Posts: 54 |
![]() Posted: 14 May 2008 at 4:25am |
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The sprites pose is readable and using color palettes from other sources isn't bad since you referenced it. The pose looks slightly awkward and I would change the lines near his buttocks a bit, because at the moment it looks like it could also be his crotch area. Overall though I say good job and keep it up.
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Metaru
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Joined: 28 December 2025 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3305 |
![]() Posted: 14 May 2008 at 6:40pm |
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yo que tu tendria cuidado con esos pantalones. poner una linea de la cadera como la tienes ahi da la impresiond e que a kilik le cuelgan las piernas de debajo de la panza. por lo demas, trabajaria un poco mas los colores, por que se ven un tanto apagados, y el uso de ese gris hace que se apaguen aun mas, kilik - y en personal casi todos los personajes de SC- usan colores muy vivos para darles mas caracter y vida, asi que si bien tomaste los colores de los sprites de los entrenadores, te recomiendo que te animes y busques los tuyos propios con la ayuda de algunas referencias, por que asi aprenderas muchisimo mas. ademas, te recomiendo que evites usar ese brodeado negro por que le quita espacio al resto de los caracteres de la imagen. la pose no me convence mucho, aunque se entiende, pero no em parece muy acertada por decirlo de una manera. quizas podrias trabajar un poco mas el sombreado para definir mas este asunto.
demas esta preguntar si usaste algun sprite de base, supongo. por lo demas, en general me ha gustado mucho este sprite, y me alegra ver cuanto has progresado en este ultimo tiempo. en verdad me encantaria ver este sprite terminado(y por que no, animado). slaudos gabo. |
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Kfuchoin
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Joined: 11 March 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 740 |
![]() Posted: 15 May 2008 at 6:16pm |
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gracias por la crítica metaru
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may the pixels be with you..
~Kfuchoin eMo looking for people for an RPG info: http://www.pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=4903 |
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