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Quote l3m0n5 Replybullet Topic: Birdie Close-up
    Posted: 15 May 2008 at 3:08pm
Inspired by Indigo's "Spectra Bird" I decided to pixel a bird of my very own. :O but after looking to LandShark's "turtle dove" for inspiration, i find myself still completely stumped on how to go about giving the feathers a feather-like texture.



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Quote Peach Replybullet Posted: 15 May 2008 at 3:55pm
any ref?
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Quote Ndsfreak Replybullet Posted: 15 May 2008 at 4:07pm
Goddamn, the beak looks great. I can't wait to see the final version.
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Quote l3m0n5 Replybullet Posted: 15 May 2008 at 6:05pm
yes well the ref is a front cover of a National Geographic which i'll find the direct link to sometime soon, but for now, i've made an update


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Quote Bengoshia Replybullet Posted: 15 May 2008 at 10:08pm
I would really suggest using some ref man
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Quote Metaru Replybullet Posted: 17 May 2008 at 11:39am
Ahuron is the name you should look for.
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Quote M.E. Replybullet Posted: 18 May 2008 at 12:48am
Hi L3m0n,

When you are referring to this I would suggest to use a real
photograph as a reference. It is better to have real life references than someone elses take on real life.

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Quote l3m0n5 Replybullet Posted: 18 May 2008 at 9:05am
actually M.E. the reference i was referring to when i said a "national geographic cover" was literally a national geographic issue cover, cuz my dad subscribes to those for a couple years now and i just stumbled upon THIS issue:


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Quote Peach Replybullet Posted: 18 May 2008 at 10:10am
nice one.
I think in you actual piece the beak is actually too much disconnected by the rest of the face. I'd add more dark feathers in the backpart. got it?
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Quote l3m0n5 Replybullet Posted: 20 May 2008 at 5:45pm
that was bugging me aswell, in any case i tried to fix that up a bit


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Quote BlackDragon Replybullet Posted: 20 May 2008 at 5:55pm
OOooOh, much better. Love it. 
 
Just noticed, your peices change so drastically from start to finish!


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Quote l3m0n5 Replybullet Posted: 20 May 2008 at 6:17pm
Dank you Berry much BlackDragon, im having a bit of trouble with the texture/shading of the actual bird feathers


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Quote Metaru Replybullet Posted: 20 May 2008 at 7:07pm
is this going to have some kind of humanoid shape? or you're going to mimic the reference?
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Quote l3m0n5 Replybullet Posted: 20 May 2008 at 7:28pm
I'm sort of hoping for something -semi realistic/semi cartoonish. That may sound impossible but Hey, thats birds for ya.
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Quote l3m0n5 Replybullet Posted: 20 May 2008 at 7:38pm
Noodle-Face anyone?

yeah.....*cough* drugs *cough*
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Quote Metaru Replybullet Posted: 20 May 2008 at 7:42pm
Originally posted by BlackDragon

Just noticed, your peices change so drastically from start to finish!


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Quote l3m0n5 Replybullet Posted: 20 May 2008 at 7:53pm
OMG Yes, i've developed some sort of distiction from other pixel artists...dare i call this a... STYLE!?? TEEE HEEEEEEEEEE!
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Quote Metaru Replybullet Posted: 20 May 2008 at 11:47pm
Or you just don't know what you want to do when you start to do it.
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Quote M.E. Replybullet Posted: 20 May 2008 at 11:54pm
Hi L3m0n5,

The beak goes further in his head.
His head should be half the size wider.

The image before the noodles had a nice feather
structure. But I would avoid the heave highlight
on the front since that looks more shiny instead
of featherly.

At least you are daring to try different things which
is really awesome!

Keep up the good work!

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