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    Posted: 14 August 2005 at 4:20pm


I've been working on this a for about 5 hours, and I've gotten it about where I want it. The best pixel art I've ever done. C&C appreciated.
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Quote Wannahlakujuu Replybullet Posted: 14 August 2005 at 4:55pm

It would be better with thinner lines.

pretty good, but it could use some shading
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Quote Acid Rain Replybullet Posted: 14 August 2005 at 4:56pm
It does have shading, although a very limited type. The reason the lines seem thick are because of the way I shadded them. I'm thinking or re-shadding the whole things, and not useing so much black.
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Quote Wannahlakujuu Replybullet Posted: 14 August 2005 at 5:04pm

hmm... I think you should do a little more shading, because right now, it looks like AA gone wrong. try stuff like making the cabinet holding the television elevated a little, and the inside a bit darker. Also, the cabinet just to our left of the computer desk a bit lighter so you can shade, and so we can see detail.

Edit: Oh, and i like the clothes scattered around the floor.reminds me of my room



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Quote Acid Rain Replybullet Posted: 14 August 2005 at 5:09pm
Ok, I'll remember that for future projects. This one was really just an experiment with Iso. I've never really done any Iso stuff before, or much pixel art for that matter. Thanks for your comments ^-^
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Quote Wannahlakujuu Replybullet Posted: 14 August 2005 at 5:16pm

Any time. I should try Iso some time. I don't really like it too much though

Edit: one more thing to remember, don't shade the top, that makes it look bad



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