Pixel Joint Forum: my first for the joint

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   Hi, I decided to try doing something for the joint and came up with the idea for showing what is in between the ceiling and floor of two different apartments instead of what is in the actual room. Here is the picture:

I know it may lack some shadows but I figured these sort of spaces generally aren't brightly lit! Note that someone has lost a few coins in one area and a remote(!) in another area. On the far left I have shown the inside of the wall in the room, you can also see a slither of the in room wall on the right corner. Yes, there should be insulation but then it would be much less interesting!

And C & C is most welcome.

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bugman Seaman Joined: 13 March 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 11	Topic: my first for the joint Posted: 18 November 2008 at 10:17pm
	Hi, I decided to try doing something for the joint and came up with the idea for showing what is in between the ceiling and floor of two different apartments instead of what is in the actual room. Here is the picture: I know it may lack some shadows but I figured these sort of spaces generally aren't brightly lit! Note that someone has lost a few coins in one area and a remote(!) in another area. On the far left I have shown the inside of the wall in the room, you can also see a slither of the in room wall on the right corner. Yes, there should be insulation but then it would be much less interesting! And C & C is most welcome.
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jalonso Admiral Joined: 12 August 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 19 November 2008 at 9:39am
	Good idea but its not clearly expressed yet :/ The colors are too boring too.
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bugman Seaman Joined: 13 March 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 11	Posted: 19 November 2008 at 3:11pm
	Is this an improvement?
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pixelblink Commander Joined: 17 October 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2865	Posted: 19 November 2008 at 4:05pm
	no. In fact I find it to be a complete waste of a room for the joint. In fact I call it lazy. But that's just my opinion
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jalonso Admiral Joined: 12 August 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 19 November 2008 at 7:11pm
	Its not really doing much, artistically speaking. Why not try all the stuff in the vertical walls too. Electrical, plumbing, money, rats, snakes even a body.
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bugman Seaman Joined: 13 March 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 11	Posted: 19 November 2008 at 9:13pm
	Thank you for the C & C. Here is the latest version, I added a lot of stuff to it.
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jalonso Admiral Joined: 12 August 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 20 November 2008 at 6:27am
	hmmm, I dunno. You say you like circuit boards. Why not a circuit board room where chips and other items are used as furniture?
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bugman Seaman Joined: 13 March 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 11	Posted: 20 November 2008 at 2:48pm
	*Originally posted by jalonso* hmmm, I dunno. You say you like circuit boards. Why not a circuit board room where chips and other items are used as furniture? Hmm, interesting idea, but I prefer to do circuits from above and I do want to do other things as well.
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volcom Commander Joined: 17 August 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 272	Posted: 29 December 2008 at 3:40pm
	just saying, u cant see much with a roof XD. I would say you also need to add alot to your 'circuit board'
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