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   ok something i started a while ago and only got tround to shading.  

One of the first pieces i drew and scaned.  need ideas for legs!!

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Shark Commander a.k.a. Feron Joined: 02 July 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2136	Topic: ninja shark Posted: 25 August 2005 at 11:28am
	ok something i started a while ago and only got tround to shading. One of the first pieces i drew and scaned. need ideas for legs!!
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Wannahlakujuu Commander Joined: 02 April 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 205	Posted: 25 August 2005 at 2:57pm
	Interesting, character, but you didn't really shade it with form. work on that, and it will look great
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Psychotic_Carp Commander Joined: 02 April 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1008	Posted: 25 August 2005 at 9:15pm
	I love the idea and it makes me smile :P but it does nit a bit of work on the shading and the bandana should have some thickness where the sharks flesh ends, or the flesh should bulge if the bandana is that tight
	got game?
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Omegavolt Commander Joined: 03 March 2005 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 227	Posted: 26 August 2005 at 1:44am
	Dont forget the dorsal fin! I love the style, cartoony is always fun. For the legs, you can always do the 'split tail', like human legs with fin feet. Other than that, youre pretty much looking at legging around on a bent tail fin. ;)
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Shark Commander a.k.a. Feron Joined: 02 July 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2136	Posted: 26 August 2005 at 2:09am
	100 posts WOHOO phychotic carp: im glad to mkae u smile. yeah i think i will make the edge of the badana stand out a bit omegavolt: fin feet!?!? how would that work.i was thinking of giving him human legs but shaded in shark colurs, maybe some of the trousers karate guys wear and a belt (green). how does it sound ps. any ideas to make the sword look good? update: comments please Edited by Shark
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Rifts Commander Joined: 14 April 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 355	Posted: 26 August 2005 at 3:25am
	the perspective on the legs look goodm but dosent seem to match the shark :S looks like the legs have a load of potantial to me/ i think the sword could use some work, a bit of AA might be good on this peice, and he has no bottem teath. oh and the bandanna looks too flat like it dosent curve round his head.

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Shark Commander a.k.a. Feron Joined: 02 July 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2136	Posted: 26 August 2005 at 3:54am
	he doesnt need bottom teeth he a special shark, nah i might put some other teeth in. i think hte legs do math because when i stand and put my legs in same positon my body can face any angle apart from backwards seeing as im not an owl. i think ill put a design on the sword like writing or flames or something
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Dixet Seaman Joined: 26 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 8	Posted: 26 August 2005 at 8:50am
	The lineart looks able to be one of "Sponge Bob" XD
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Dutrho Commander Joined: 04 July 2005 Location: Canada Online Status: Offline Posts: 237	Posted: 26 August 2005 at 9:05am
	for the feet you could try some webbed feet with fins as toes.
	Mmmm.. Thats good placebo!
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Citizen_Insane Commander Joined: 30 March 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 189	Posted: 26 August 2005 at 1:43pm
	that's kind of funny.. you should do some other ninja colleagues, or like a samurai squid or something. one thing that particularly stands out to me is the teeth, they just seem kind of blah compared to everything else.. maybe you should thicken the blood a bit, and add more definition to the teeth to kind of separate them... maybe a thicker outline around the whole thing would look pretty cool, too.. but it's your piece
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Shark Commander a.k.a. Feron Joined: 02 July 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2136	Posted: 26 August 2005 at 3:28pm
	i no the teeth need work i only put them in temporarily, i do more work on the thanks for c&c citizen insane i did make up a crappy drawing of a hammer head boxer i may make a collection
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Maestro Seaman Joined: 27 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 31	Posted: 26 August 2005 at 4:32pm
	Guess what. I found the idea that funky that I whipped this little fella up: Nunchuckies! Since it's all your idea and such, it's a present for you.
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Shark Commander a.k.a. Feron Joined: 02 July 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2136	Posted: 26 August 2005 at 4:39pm
	nice gd aaing and all in about 10 colors update: Edited by Shark
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Citizen_Insane Commander Joined: 30 March 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 189	Posted: 27 August 2005 at 5:25pm
	that's pretty good what you should do, though.. or what I would do, is I'd make the grass get gradually darker as you go further back towards the mountains and stuff... just to show some depth, you know?
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Shark Commander a.k.a. Feron Joined: 02 July 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2136	Posted: 31 August 2005 at 4:12am
	piece uploaded to gallery. http://www.pixeljoint.com/pixelart/5565.htm
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