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Vazoh
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Quote Vazoh Replybullet Topic: won't accept my art???
    Posted: 19 January 2009 at 3:56pm


The people won't accept TEH MUSHROOM!!! I'm only a noob at pixel art, and they won't accept the best I can do! Help please?
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Quote skeddles Replybullet Posted: 19 January 2009 at 4:34pm
Do more! It's a very small piece, and there isn't much to it. It just isn't very interesting. Use your imagination. Give it a scary face, or some sort of cool design. Maybe a nice background.

If you want crits, I'd say do some selective outlining, in other words, change the black line around the blue part to a dark blue, and the black line around the tan part to a brown.

You also might want to add a little contrast to the colors. Contrast is your friend.


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Quote Club Beuker Replybullet Posted: 20 January 2009 at 7:06am
Don't forget to follow the shape when you're shading. You did follow it a bit, but it can be better. Drop the dithering and up your contrast (as said by skeddles).

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Edited by Club Beuker - 20 January 2009 at 7:15am
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