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Damian
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Quote Damian Replybullet Topic: Looking Down on the World!
    Posted: 22 February 2009 at 11:46am
A WIP!!! Well its been a while.
Looking Down on the world!
An idea inspired by a cartoon I watched on tv.(Tom and Jerry!!You've got to love the oldies!)
I got into it straight away but implemented a man instead of a cat..




Well its one of those work in progress that I'm not sure if anatomy wise I'm right. So some Feed back on that is deeply appreciated.

So what you think? Colours ok?


Looking forward to your comments.

Edited by Jim16 - 22 February 2009 at 11:46am
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Quote Antiboton Replybullet Posted: 22 February 2009 at 1:16pm
I like but I'm not sure what is the front and what is the back.
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Quote Damian Replybullet Posted: 22 February 2009 at 1:39pm
Originally posted by Antiboton

I like but I'm not sure what is the front and what is the back.

Can you be more clear please?

It's only really blobbed out...due to wanting some words on the anatomy part. So no fine details yet.

If you look at it though he's looking down at you. Not sure if I got it right. If not then shout, and presto I'll see what I can do.
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Quote Platnium Replybullet Posted: 22 February 2009 at 1:42pm
The thigh seems like it is as wide as the whole upper region (the stomach and chest) I would make it so that two thighs are around about the same width as the upper.
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Quote cure Replybullet Posted: 22 February 2009 at 8:37pm
Seems more like a guy with a small torso stretching against a wall.  Be more consistent with your foreshortening.
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