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abzdragon
Seaman 
Joined: 14 July 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 8 |
   Topic: Fish TankPosted: 14 September 2005 at 8:27pm |
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I love fish and have been meaning to make a little tank for sometime so
I definately want some critiques on this piece... (be mean but not TOO
mean lol) I originally did the gravel in blue... I dunno if I like the
brown but I am quite fond of the goldfishes and plan to animate
them later... I am thinking of adding an animated bubble wand in the
back... but for now... what do you think? color scheme good/bad? are
the props ugly? How can I make the front look more like glass...
tell me whats wrong with it!
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pixelblink
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Joined: 19 February 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2865 |
Posted: 14 September 2005 at 8:32pm |
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Well alot of fish tanks have fake backgrounds so feel free to throw one in if you feel like it. Those rocks look a bit outlined too dark near the top area. Mjaybe add some rough spots on em. I like the fish themselves... good colour choices Hope this helps |
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Pixel_Outlaw
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Joined: 01 September 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3829 |
Posted: 14 September 2005 at 11:14pm |
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make the back panel a little darker and add some sharp diagonall white lines across everything in the front! Looks good!
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abzdragon
Seaman
Joined: 14 July 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 8 |
Posted: 15 September 2005 at 5:21pm |
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Thanks for the ideas guys!! I am going to get to work on shading the
rocks better and playing with the "glass" idea... I shall post updates
later on
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pangaru
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Joined: 07 October 2005 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 22 |
Posted: 10 October 2005 at 6:05pm |
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Oooh, very cool! I definitely think you hould animate this.
Oh, you could add little treasure chest that opens up and spits out bubbles! |
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I swear, adjustable waistbands are going to take over the world...
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You should animate them. Plant life looks good but maybe give em some AAing when you've added water and the fish and everything. As floor the glass on the fornt, give it some squiggly highlighting lines to add sheen.