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Quote PSC159 Replybullet Topic: Alien WIP
    Posted: 20 August 2009 at 10:09am
So after a while I decided to go back and edit an alien I made. But instead of editing it i decided to make a side version of the alien. This is what it came out to be.



It turned out okay but I had yet to make the arms. What do you think of the alien side view so far?
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Quote cheezburger Replybullet Posted: 20 August 2009 at 10:27am
looks real skinny from the side while he looks fat from the front 
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Quote PSC159 Replybullet Posted: 20 August 2009 at 11:29am
Yeah. I'll change the fatness.
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Quote cure Replybullet Posted: 20 August 2009 at 12:49pm
using way too many colors, most of which don't show up well at 1x. Use fewer colors with more contrast between them. don't outline shadows. Also not sure why the shadow gets lighter inwards.
Overall it's a bit small and simple, I'd add some traits to make him interesting or at least increase the size, if not both.
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