Pixel Joint Forum: Beach[WIP]

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pipe
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Topic: Beach[WIP]
Posted: 01 November 2009 at 3:58pm

so I need help whit this one.The biggest problem is sea.I cant draw some wawes and it looks empty whitout wawes.Can someone draw me some to give me some idea?

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Manupix
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Posted: 01 November 2009 at 5:50pm

The PJ search engine is your friend!

You might look for cliffs too, these are weird; and you need a horizon!

And for some reason, it's an ugly jpeg... probably stupid imageshack's fault.

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A.B. Lazer
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Posted: 01 November 2009 at 6:29pm

That white lines pass as waves for me enough, but learning is always good.

On the other things: why rock on the foreground casts a shadow, and cliff not? And why trees in the background don't cast shadow?

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pipe
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Posted: 02 November 2009 at 4:09am

Originally posted by A.B. Lazer

That white lines pass as waves for me enough, but learning is always good.

On the other things: why rock on the foreground casts a shadow, and cliff not? And why trees in the background don't cast shadow?

yeah I was going to fix that and I agree, cliffs are looking strange.
@Manupix:What do you mean I need a horizon?
Thanks all, I think I will finish it soon...

Edited by pipe - 02 November 2009 at 4:13am

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Manupix
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Posted: 03 November 2009 at 2:51pm

What I mean is you have a problem with perspective. I can't explain this in detail here. Either check the excellent wikipedia article about persp, or the little tutorial I just added to the 'noobtorials' thread.
In short, the tree line being sideways is unnatural. Either there is a horizon line behind it, or the trees are the horizon: should be horizontal. Also, the cliffs need a vanishing point. An edit would help, but I can't make one from where I post. Sorry.

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Pumpkinbot
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Posted: 03 November 2009 at 5:43pm

Looks pretty good (besides JPG. Eew!), but I'd upload it to Photobucket. Imageshack is pure fail. x_o

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pipe
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Posted: 04 November 2009 at 12:32pm

Originally posted by Manupix

What I mean is you have a problem with perspective. I can't explain this in detail here. Either check the excellent wikipedia article about persp, or the little tutorial I just added to the 'noobtorials' thread.
In short, the tree line being sideways is unnatural. Either there is a horizon line behind it, or the trees are the horizon: should be horizontal. Also, the cliffs need a vanishing point. An edit would help, but I can't make one from where I post. Sorry.

yeah now I see what you mean.Thank you again.I will finish this work later cause I want to focus on weekly challenge now.
@Pumkinbot:Yes Imageshack is piece of sh*t I accidently used it this time.

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pipe Commander Joined: 11 August 2008 Location: Croatia Online Status: Offline Posts: 110	Topic: Beach[WIP] Posted: 01 November 2009 at 3:58pm
	so I need help whit this one.The biggest problem is sea.I cant draw some wawes and it looks empty whitout wawes.Can someone draw me some to give me some idea?
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Manupix Commander Joined: 05 November 2024 Online Status: Offline Posts: 771	Posted: 01 November 2009 at 5:50pm
	The PJ search engine is your friend! You might look for cliffs too, these are weird; and you need a horizon! And for some reason, it's an ugly jpeg... probably stupid imageshack's fault.
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A.B. Lazer Commander Joined: 21 July 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 310	Posted: 01 November 2009 at 6:29pm
	That white lines pass as waves for me enough, but learning is always good. On the other things: why rock on the foreground casts a shadow, and cliff not? And why trees in the background don't cast shadow?
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pipe Commander Joined: 11 August 2008 Location: Croatia Online Status: Offline Posts: 110	Posted: 02 November 2009 at 4:09am
	*Originally posted by A.B. Lazer* That white lines pass as waves for me enough, but learning is always good. On the other things: why rock on the foreground casts a shadow, and cliff not? And why trees in the background don't cast shadow? yeah I was going to fix that and I agree, cliffs are looking strange. @Manupix:What do you mean I need a horizon? Thanks all, I think I will finish it soon... Edited by pipe - 02 November 2009 at 4:13am
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Manupix Commander Joined: 05 November 2024 Online Status: Offline Posts: 771	Posted: 03 November 2009 at 2:51pm
	What I mean is you have a problem with perspective. I can't explain this in detail here. Either check the excellent wikipedia article about persp, or the little tutorial I just added to the 'noobtorials' thread. In short, the tree line being sideways is unnatural. Either there is a horizon line behind it, or the trees are the horizon: should be horizontal. Also, the cliffs need a vanishing point. An edit would help, but I can't make one from where I post. Sorry.
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Pumpkinbot Commander Joined: 05 May 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 202	Posted: 03 November 2009 at 5:43pm
	Looks pretty good (besides JPG. Eew!), but I'd upload it to Photobucket. Imageshack is pure fail. x_o
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pipe Commander Joined: 11 August 2008 Location: Croatia Online Status: Offline Posts: 110	Posted: 04 November 2009 at 12:32pm
	*Originally posted by Manupix* What I mean is you have a problem with perspective. I can't explain this in detail here. Either check the excellent wikipedia article about persp, or the little tutorial I just added to the 'noobtorials' thread. In short, the tree line being sideways is unnatural. Either there is a horizon line behind it, or the trees are the horizon: should be horizontal. Also, the cliffs need a vanishing point. An edit would help, but I can't make one from where I post. Sorry. yeah now I see what you mean.Thank you again.I will finish this work later cause I want to focus on weekly challenge now. @Pumkinbot:Yes Imageshack is piece of sh*t I accidently used it this time.
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