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Quote VEGET@ Replybullet Topic: [WIP]Tiles n sprites
    Posted: 23 January 2010 at 11:04pm
Hello i´m new iin the forum. my english is some bad

i´m doing a game, the character is a cyborg named Yioge:




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Quote VEGET@ Replybullet Posted: 25 January 2010 at 3:03am
No comments???
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Quote rustEdge Replybullet Posted: 25 January 2010 at 5:28am
It's pretty hard to comment on sprites of this sort. It would be great if you could set up a mock-up so we can see how the sprites are gonna be used. Then we could give proper critiques based on that.
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Quote cure Replybullet Posted: 25 January 2010 at 9:42am
the human is good, looks heavily inspired by dbz sprites though.
monsters seem rather uninspired (block with arms, pear shape with legs)
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Quote VEGET@ Replybullet Posted: 25 January 2010 at 1:36pm
I change the human sprite,credit to angryboy from DBZ vortex.

A new mockup:
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Quote Manupix Replybullet Posted: 27 January 2010 at 12:27pm
This looks quite good.
I have a little readability problem on the right one: can't decide if it's a brick wall or a paved road with the enemy walking on it. OK, I know it's a wall because I know the guy flies, but I don't see it.
Maybe more squarish bricks would help, and a cast shadow from the guys and platform, if compatible with tiling.
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