[Pixel] Nature Signature | Need CC
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Topic: [Pixel] Nature Signature | Need CC
Posted By: .Vinno
Subject: [Pixel] Nature Signature | Need CC
Date Posted: 13 May 2010 at 4:43am
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Hey guys, I'm new on Pixeljoint, and I'll give you a short summary on me, Name; Vincent Surname; Not for you  From; The Netherlands (my English is not so bad, I'm on an English school Age; 14 Anyway, I'm a beginner at pixeling, and I need some critisism from the proffesionals on Pixeljoint   Post anything, it will help me to get better Cheers |
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Posted By: PixelSnader
Date Posted: 14 May 2010 at 12:48am
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Are the grass and trees somewhat the final look, or just scribbled sketches? Because they look like scribbles.
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Posted By: .Vinno
Date Posted: 14 May 2010 at 12:51am
They are final, yes. But if you have tips for me to improve them, you can give them
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Posted By: Dhr. Bosch
Date Posted: 14 May 2010 at 6:29am
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the grass indeed looks really messy it also looks very flat, this is because you aply even contrast throughout the patch. try using most contrast up close and progressively less contrast the furter away. kind of like what you did in the river. same goes for the enourmous blob of green in the middle. i really like the tree on the right, you gave it's leaves an interesting texture (although it is indeed still a bit messy), this howeverer, makes the tree on the left look really bad in contrast and it's blobs of green are totally pillowshaded. good luck, fellow dutchman, i can tell by your current skill that you can make this a great piece, just put some more effort into it. ------------- Vanitas, vanitatum omnia vanitas |