need some imroves
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Topic: need some imroves
Posted By: bry.den
Subject: need some imroves
Date Posted: 19 June 2010 at 3:12pm
I have nice idea, but I can't make this picture pretty enough.
Any suggestions ? |
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Posted By: zero57
Date Posted: 19 June 2010 at 4:50pm
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Originally posted by bry.den I have nice idea, but I can't make this picture pretty enough.
Any suggestions ? 1. Change the background colour! It's burning my eyes! Never use a really bright colour. As it will burn peoples eyes, you'll lose some ratings for it. 2. How about some shading? You can probably put a background to it rather than having bright purple that burns people's eyes. |
Posted By: bry.den
Date Posted: 21 June 2010 at 6:00am
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thanks for feedback
new version: 
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Posted By: sir-lewis
Date Posted: 21 June 2010 at 7:15am
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That was a great improvement, perhaps, try lightening the bright blue as that is pretty bright on the eyes aswel. =] |
Posted By: zero57
Date Posted: 21 June 2010 at 8:30am
| Yes, great improvement. Pretty much what sir-lewis said. |
Posted By: bry.den
Date Posted: 22 June 2010 at 3:57am
how about this ?
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