Please help improving.
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Category: Pixel Art
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Printed Date: 09 September 2025 at 7:55am
Topic: Please help improving.
Posted By: Super Duper
Subject: Please help improving.
Date Posted: 08 August 2010 at 6:11pm
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Suraisu no kage meaning Slice shadow
I'm officially making my own game. A ninja based game 2d of course.  </a>
that is what I have so far. What I do need is a good pallet change to make it more interesting. A few enemy ideas. And a tile set idea. The story line is not quite done but I'm open for ideas. |
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Posted By: Super Duper
Date Posted: 08 August 2010 at 6:24pm
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don't mind the ugly devil minion thing...
Ok... Heres some other sprites I have.  </a>
Its another game I'm making but its on hold till I finish the one above, Its a zombie game. |
Posted By: meagz
Date Posted: 08 August 2010 at 9:59pm
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he has no arms!
your 1st palettes could do with some hue shifting too, i like the hat guy |
Posted By: Super Duper
Date Posted: 08 August 2010 at 10:33pm
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Originally posted by meagz hey congrats on 100 posts :D
he has no arms! your 1st palettes could do with some hue shifting too, i like the hat guy |
Posted By: W M
Date Posted: 08 August 2010 at 10:41pm
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(Even thought you said dont mind him ;D) You devil character is certainly the best developed of the bunch -- it accentuates not only shapes, but volume and abstraction that is really fun to look at. Pay attention to the details of the devil, such as the way the eyes wrap around the head, or how the thighs shift from organic shape to geometric, and try to apply that to the others. Great start, and great style.  |
Posted By: Super Duper
Date Posted: 08 August 2010 at 11:14pm
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Thanks :D
Well I'll fix my guys and how about the colors... To me they seem boring. Edit:  </a>
Oh and could tell me how should i do my walk,/run for the main guy... The guy with the hat |
Posted By: Super Duper
Date Posted: 09 August 2010 at 6:08pm
| Ok so I'm Guessing my sprite are well some or really bad no wants to comment on it.. |