House
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
URL: https://pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=10953
Printed Date: 12 September 2025 at 1:30am
Topic: House
Posted By: ShadeTornado
Subject: House
Date Posted: 04 September 2010 at 11:13am
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It's not a very interesting image, but I want to find out what I'm doing wrong and where I can improve :).
This is the original image that I made: 
I got some comments on that, remembered a tutorial I read once and changed it into this: 
But that edit removed some details (it was harder to see the doors and windows, and the little details in them). I took another look at it and then tried to create a mix of my first image and my second: 
But I still feel that I'm doing something wrong. Can someone give me some tips or maybe remake the image to point out the flaws? That would be really helpful :). |
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Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 04 September 2010 at 11:23am
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Thanks for making a WIP thread for this. Its easier than having every edit being sent back...we don't like doing that to people. I'll post my c+c later today with some edits to illustrate my opinion on your house. *for now, remember, you have to make a nice #25 that matches your neighbors, and I won't forget it, so be thinking about that :p ------------- |
Posted By: ShadeTornado
Date Posted: 04 September 2010 at 11:30am
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Originally posted by jalonso
*for now, remember, you have to make a nice #25 that matches your neighbors, and I won't forget it, so be thinking about that :p What do you mean by this? What's a #25? =P And why should whatever it is be matching my neighbors? =S |
Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 04 September 2010 at 11:32am
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The iso collab space you claimed (was forced upon you) which you apparently already forgot about :p
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Posted By: ShadeTornado
Date Posted: 04 September 2010 at 11:43am
| I didn't forget it =O You just didn't see it :P. I edited my post because paint was acting up and destroying the .gif (now that I'm thinking about it, I could try to do it in paint.NET) |
Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 04 September 2010 at 6:06pm
More stuff like this in the n00btorial thread in the resource section, if you haven't seen that already. ------------- |
Posted By: ShadeTornado
Date Posted: 05 September 2010 at 8:31am
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Wow. I wasn't expecting something that detailed =O =P.
It's really helpful though. Thanks a lot :). I think I'll study that a bit more, read that n00btorial thread, play around with some stuff and eventually try posting something like this again. Thanks a lot for the info and the effort you put into this :) |
Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 05 September 2010 at 9:18am
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No biggie, go practice and have fun :) I was gonna animate it with a UFO flying over it and then exploding the house but thought it was too much, too fast  ------------- |
Posted By: vlad61
Date Posted: 05 September 2010 at 1:26pm
| lol love those animations where you're like...hey this would be cool. then getting started on it you realize the back breaking work you're in for... |
Posted By: ShadeTornado
Date Posted: 05 September 2010 at 2:31pm
| Hehe, maybe I'll try (if I'm able to improve on my pixelart, that is) to make an UFO/exploding house animation XD |