Non-pixel digital work
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Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 09 September 2025 at 7:56am
Topic: Non-pixel digital work
Posted By: H|F
Subject: Non-pixel digital work
Date Posted: 06 January 2011 at 10:31pm
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Finally came back to this sketch wanting to "ink" it and add color BUT before I do that I would love some feedback!
Know it needs allot of work.
Xixa (c) http://dadward.deviantart.com/ - Dadward
btw, don't worry he is a close friend of mine and is ok with the fanart
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Posted By: Zeratanus
Date Posted: 07 January 2011 at 3:48pm
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Compared to how drastically quick the body seems to get smaller the arms seem to stay the same length and the hands are big. Shoulders are also a bit wide themselves but its not as noticeable.
Also the chest seems very flatly squashed (it's more of the cleavage area rather than the shirt that makes it look this way i think) |
Posted By: H|F
Date Posted: 07 January 2011 at 8:46pm
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slight edit to her shoulders so they wouldn't look as wide. also I do need to point out that her hands/arms get very large from the elbow down. http://dadward.deviantart.com/art/Official-Xixa-Model-Sheet-65091156?q=gallery%3Adadward%2F71295&qo=17 - ref of how she is suppose to look. her arms here aren't as big because it's in my style. I understand what you are saying. Not sure how to fix it lol
edit to her cleavage, totally know what you mean. I can seehow awful it looked lol
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