Tank!
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
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Printed Date: 09 September 2025 at 10:40pm
Topic: Tank!
Posted By: Brian the Great
Subject: Tank!
Date Posted: 06 December 2005 at 8:21am
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Long time, no pixel.
Just putting this up so I can have some crits on it for when I have time to work on this baby again. 
(lines where done long time ago, I think I posted them in the Lines Den.) I don't think I need to explain what is finished and what's still WIP. Again, C&C appreciated. ------------- http://www.twoschizos.com"> 
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Posted By: 0xDB
Date Posted: 06 December 2005 at 2:41pm
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It's all pixelled very well, i think. I'm not going to make the obvious
comment that the tracks and wheels need to be textured and shaded. Detail Suggestions: Add some MG, and maybe an antenna. Physics: I think if this tank would be driving uphill, it would fall on its back, so i suggest extending the base, so the weight gets distributed a little more believable. |
Posted By: Shark
Date Posted: 06 December 2005 at 2:44pm
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Originally posted by Dennis Busch
I'm not going to make the obvious comment that the tracks and wheels need to be textured and shaded. You just did! this is nicely shaded mr penquin, however i dont like teh overall anatomy of it. it seems top heavy and the 2 sections dont really seemed joined. perhaps add a few more details aswell, ie mud and dirt and paint, and blood 
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Posted By: 0xDB
Date Posted: 06 December 2005 at 2:59pm
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Originally posted by Shark perhaps add a few more details aswell, ie mud and dirt and paint, and blood And while we're at it, some limbs from various undefined creatures hanging out from the wheels and tracks would be nice too.  |
Posted By: Shark
Date Posted: 06 December 2005 at 3:20pm
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Posted By: Brian the Great
Date Posted: 07 December 2005 at 4:43am
Let's keep it constructive.
Didn't add blood because I don't like gore all that much. ------------- http://www.twoschizos.com">
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Posted By: Shark
Date Posted: 07 December 2005 at 8:14am
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better but i still thinks it needs a slightly wider base than top, its almost square. |
Posted By: 0xDB
Date Posted: 08 December 2005 at 12:27am
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(The suggestion with the limbs was just a joke.) Another option(if you don't want to extend the base) would be to add some very heavy and huge counterweight to the frontside, but that might look silly. That MG looks cool. |
Posted By: Aleiav
Date Posted: 10 December 2005 at 12:28am
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Is this different from a regular tank? Because I always pictured the
top revolving gun portion to be smaller than the rest of the tank. :P Either way, I think it's coming through well. I'd suggest making the wheels move and making it shoot for fun. :) |