Space WIP need help
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Topic: Space WIP need help
Posted By: Damcen
Subject: Space WIP need help
Date Posted: 03 August 2011 at 6:22am
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So, this is my first piece of PA
but i need some help.. i was wondering if you guys could give me some help??? 
Constructive Crit. Please :) |
Replies:
Posted By: cure
Date Posted: 03 August 2011 at 7:01am
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on the left side: the dithering on the ships is unnecessary the aa on that little blue ring is nice. but much more aa would be nicer (on the blue line, edges of the ships, just don't go overboard on aa). It looks like maybe you tried to make the lazer glow show up on the ship? it should be much more dramatic if it's the only significant light source near by. on the right side: shouldn't those red electric things be the light source here? If so, shade the ships accordingly. again, dithering isn't helping. |