WIP: Haqu.
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
URL: https://pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=12646
Printed Date: 12 September 2025 at 2:00pm
Topic: WIP: Haqu.
Posted By: Alanbato
Subject: WIP: Haqu.
Date Posted: 03 August 2011 at 3:01pm
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This is a little project I've been working on, I've only managed to shade her blouse, all critics are accepted.
I'm a newb so please explain what you mean while Critizing. I'm also a newb of english, so sometimes I make grammar mistakes or misspell things :P Updated: 
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Posted By: Alanbato
Date Posted: 03 August 2011 at 3:14pm
| Forum is dead. Sorry for using the dark arts of Necromancy. |
Posted By: Miumau0
Date Posted: 03 August 2011 at 5:02pm
| yeah, it may seem that forum is dead, but theres still people to crit. It took 14 mins and you reposted and "bumped" this topic. -__- Lineart looks good, referencee for this? |
Posted By: Alanbato
Date Posted: 03 August 2011 at 7:21pm
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Hehe, sorry ^^U I'm used to big forums.
Anyway, the Line Art is not mine really D: One friend of mine made it, here's his DA Account: http://darthvulgar.deviantart.com/ |
Posted By: Alanbato
Date Posted: 03 August 2011 at 8:54pm
Update:
I'm having problems with the legs, any tips I could use? And what are my problems, what looks odd, what can I improve? Please, it's very important for me D: |
Posted By: cure
Date Posted: 03 August 2011 at 9:32pm
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that's not really significant enough to warrant bumping your thread. just edit the first post instead, and only bump your thread if you have a major update or it falls off the front page and you still intend to work on it. ditch the dithering, you probably won't need it and you shouldn't be worrying about it at this point anyway. you need more contrast in your skin palette, it's all washed out right now. |
Posted By: Alanbato
Date Posted: 03 August 2011 at 10:29pm
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Ok ok, I've learnt my lesson, don't bump and only do it after is buried in other threads.
I all want is some feedback >_< |
Posted By: yaomon17
Date Posted: 04 August 2011 at 3:08pm
| He did give feedback. Now you fix it and post an edit. |