There be spaceships?
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Topic: There be spaceships?
Posted By: Alex Pang
Subject: There be spaceships?
Date Posted: 20 August 2011 at 12:59pm
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Greetings, I haven't really pixel'ed much recently, but I managed to cook up some spaceships today. And I need some critique and comments on these spaceships. What I was looking for was to make that little 3D'ish effect, that fools your eyes to think that the ship is three dimensional by tilting rotating and screwing and stretching! I feel that I did this pretty well but I want to get some critique and maybe some tips :P.
I'm not fully happy with the colors on the first ship but this was before I learned about neutralizing colors. Well enough talk for now here are the ships: 
Thanks in advance. -- -Alex |
Replies:
Posted By: SumYungGai
Date Posted: 20 August 2011 at 8:20pm
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That looks really cool! I don't like how light and smooth the first ship looks, though. Those (lights?) on the side could use some detail... And on ship no. 2 stretch the light/cockpit in the center a little as the ship wobbles. |
Posted By: ChrisButton
Date Posted: 21 August 2011 at 1:52am
| Ship number two looks like it's being seen through a fisheye lens. |
Posted By: Qemist
Date Posted: 21 August 2011 at 4:28am
| what ChrisButton said, but I also think it goes a little too fast |
Posted By: Alex Pang
Date Posted: 21 August 2011 at 4:36am
Update, and what do you mean by fisheye lens? |
Posted By: Mr Special
Date Posted: 21 August 2011 at 6:53am
| It sort of looks like its growing as it tilts. I think that's what they meant by the fisheye lens. Kinda distorted? The mass seems a little inconsistent when the ship tilts. Maybe the side tilting downward needs to be moved a few pixels? The first one is certainly better. Overall good job :) |