TV WIP
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
URL: https://pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=13181
Printed Date: 11 September 2025 at 5:32pm
Topic: TV WIP
Posted By: Aastikya
Subject: TV WIP
Date Posted: 16 October 2011 at 4:04am
Hello , this is a TV I made. But I guess it doesn't look good so I need your help to make it better. Thanks for help |
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Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 16 October 2011 at 5:38am
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Turn it on. If you get no reception try using antennas instead of light sabres. ------------- |
Posted By: Aastikya
Date Posted: 16 October 2011 at 6:07am
| Lol , are you serious? |
Posted By: Aastikya
Date Posted: 16 October 2011 at 6:16am
| I want to submit it to PJ gallery |
Posted By: SpeedXaaa
Date Posted: 16 October 2011 at 8:00am
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What he's saying is that the antennae are way too thick, which I'd have to agree with.
I...don't really know where to start, though, other than suggesting you read http://www.pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=5692&PN=1 - This and http://www.pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=5692&PN=1 - This thread pretty thoroughly. You got the drop-shadow pretty nicely, but as to where said shadow is located and how it casts, that would mean that the lightsource should be at the top, which it is not. |
Posted By: Aastikya
Date Posted: 16 October 2011 at 9:17am
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Well I read the noobtorials already. Well , about the shadow thanks for correcting. I took the lightsource wrong if we talk about the drop shadow.
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Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 16 October 2011 at 9:22am
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Originally posted by Aastikya
Lol , are you serious? Dead serious! Turn the channel to I Love Lucy :) Originally posted by Aastikya I want to submit it to PJ gallery Won't be added yet, k. Beside some precision issues making a mid-century TV and omitting dials is unforgivable. ------------- |
Posted By: Aastikya
Date Posted: 16 October 2011 at 10:01am
This is my reference, sir |
Posted By: CELS
Date Posted: 16 October 2011 at 10:19am
I'm looking forward to seeing how this turns out.  Anyway, the only thing that really stands out to me is the way you've shaded the legs. Look at the reference pic and notice how the lightest area is a line down the length of the leg, since it's a cone / cylinder shape. In the reference pic, the light source is on the right, so the brightest line on the legs is on the right side of the leg. You've got it opposite (light source on left, legs brighter on right). |
Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 16 October 2011 at 10:39am
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My bad... ...thingies without knobs and buttons are still magic to me... ...understand that I had to walk 8 miles to the only TV in the village... ...ours had knobs as we were so poor :( ------------- |