Kisame Face
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Category: Pixel Art
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Topic: Kisame Face
Posted By: Aastikya
Subject: Kisame Face
Date Posted: 27 October 2011 at 10:28pm
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Here is a face of Kisame.
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/207/kisamep.gif/"> 
Reference : http://images.saiyanisland.com/data/505/kisame.jpg Help me improve this piece so that I can submit it to PJ gallery :) Thanking You Aastikya |
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Posted By: Aastikya
Date Posted: 28 October 2011 at 4:05am
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bump
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Posted By: Gecimen
Date Posted: 28 October 2011 at 6:52am
| Firstly try to pick a lightsource and add shading and lighting. |
Posted By: Aastikya
Date Posted: 28 October 2011 at 7:22am
| Well I did the same type of shading that was in reference. |
Posted By: Christoballs
Date Posted: 28 October 2011 at 7:26am
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Nice bump post there, Aastikya. I disagree with Gecimen: you've followed the lightsource from the reference, but your main issue is getting the proportions more or less the same. You may also notice that Kisame has grey skin in the picture, and not with a blue tint to it as you've done. The same applies to hair: generally you should be aiming for a grey palette. Here's my edit (I wanted to get the face's proportions and details about right) next to your current piece:  |
Posted By: Aastikya
Date Posted: 28 October 2011 at 9:25am
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Ah see I see the mistake now. Thanks..
Well, Kisame is from mist and also in anime it has a blueish skin so I gave it a blue tint. |
Posted By: Christoballs
Date Posted: 28 October 2011 at 10:27am
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They aren't mistakes, they're inconsistencies in what you wish to achieve. I'd like to remind on a more general note to newcomers that on an art critique board matters aren't necessarily as straightforward as 1+1=2. It's not that simple, because I'm not "right" and nor is my work, and your work isn't "wrong" and you aren't "wrong", so to speak. It's a question of what you want to do with your creation. I can suggest a result which can help you reach your goal, or even change your goal. |
Posted By: Aastikya
Date Posted: 29 October 2011 at 3:15am
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Well here is another face. I made Kisame look like a lady so it's a Lady Kisame and Piccolo.
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/195/kisamee.png/"> 
Light sources in both the faces are different so don't confuse where is light source actually |
Posted By: Aastikya
Date Posted: 29 October 2011 at 7:45am
| Can this be accepted by PJ gallery? |
Posted By: feyincognito
Date Posted: 29 October 2011 at 9:43pm
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It looks like your light source affecting Kisame's hair is coming from the opposite direction of the light source affecting Kisame's face. The hair is highlighted on the right and the face is highlighted on the left. It also looks like there is no light affecting the headband. ------------- "Can you build websites with firefox?" "Can you build cars with roads?" |
Posted By: Aastikya
Date Posted: 30 October 2011 at 5:51am
| Alright , thanks for help. Anything else? |