Hillside
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Topic: Hillside
Posted By: BdSxLegend
Subject: Hillside
Date Posted: 29 October 2011 at 7:36am
Good? Bad?
Feel Free to help. |
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Posted By: CELS
Date Posted: 29 October 2011 at 8:01am
Good. Could be better  Here are a few suggestions: - Keep the outlines a similar color as their object. For example, the distant hills are much brighter, so you should use brighter outlines. (You can also not use them) - Your outlines have a lot of jaggies. See the FAQ if you don't know what that means. - When you're drawing a landscape, things that are far away will typically have less saturation (less color) and have more blue. The most distant hill in your picture is more yellow and has a stronger colour, so it looks like everything else is covered by a cloud or something. - It's very hard to see the objects on the closest hill. The flower stalks are almost the same color as the grass and I don't know what that other thing is. - Unless your birds are specially trained, they probably won't all have the wings in same position at the same time :) |