ISO city work in progress
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Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 12 September 2025 at 6:18am
Topic: ISO city work in progress
Posted By: Dollxx
Subject: ISO city work in progress
Date Posted: 04 November 2011 at 12:53pm
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Hello all,
I'm posting here so I can recieve some critiques and such on something I'm working on for this site: http://www.kennethfejer.com/isocity/ - ISOCITY 
I'm thinking of adding a dragon wrapped around the rock, and possibly adding a smoke animation coming from it's nose, but I'm not sure. Any suggestions, comments, and crits are much appreciated. :) |
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Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 04 November 2011 at 5:53pm
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The colors might need a bit more contrast than that. Before you get too far along, the rocks and ground stones are not isometric. ------------- |
Posted By: Dollxx
Date Posted: 04 November 2011 at 6:38pm
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Originally posted by jalonso
The colors might need a bit more contrast than that.Before you get too far along, the rocks and ground stones are not isometric. Not very constructive but okay...I'll be sure to work more on my colour palette seeing as this is still a work in progress. As for it not being isometric, I have had one person assure me that it is. Is there any way you could tell me why you believe otherwise and possibly how I could fix it? Thank you for spending the time to post :) |
Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 04 November 2011 at 6:59pm
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I'll throw a rough edit your way in a few :)
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Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 04 November 2011 at 7:44pm
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Originally posted by Dollxx ...Not very constructive but okay... Contrast is low and needs to be upped, I can't elaborate on my opinion here much more than that unless I get really technical which I didn't have the time when posting :/ I am not the best at this but the rock pile doesn't appear to be isometric as do the ground stones. Even organic shapes need to have a basis on the grid as the eye can't be fooled on this.  ------------- |
Posted By: Dollxx
Date Posted: 04 November 2011 at 8:03pm
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Originally posted by Dollxx
...Not very constructive but okay... Sorry should have specified that I only found the brief explanation that it wasn't isometric to not be very constructive. As for the palette I know it needs a lot of work x') Originally posted by jalonso
That helped a lot thank you :) I'll be sure to revise and post an update when I fix it up. |