3d Tv
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Printed Date: 11 September 2025 at 5:33pm
Topic: 3d Tv
Posted By: Aastikya
Subject: 3d Tv
Date Posted: 06 November 2011 at 11:29pm
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Help me make it better. Thanks |
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Posted By: Zeratanus
Date Posted: 07 November 2011 at 8:39pm
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Well right now it looks like a TV covered in slime, with some weird circle thingy in front of it. if you give us some indication of the direction you're trying to go with it, so we know what you want it to be we could help a lot more than just taking random guesses. |
Posted By: Aastikya
Date Posted: 08 November 2011 at 6:09am
| The circular thing is a tennis ball. And , the thing which you call slimy is grass XD |
Posted By: Lathien
Date Posted: 08 November 2011 at 9:10am
| It doesn't make sense that the grass is breaking the edge of the tv. Even if it's 3D and coming out of the tv, in a tennis match the camera wouldn't have a close-up of the court to have it be only grass. You should have an actual tennis match going on in the tv, or maybe just a single player in a freeze frame as they hit the ball towards the camera and it flies out of the tv. As for the tennis ball itself, first tennis balls are a lot more yellow than green, and right now it looks way too flat, you need some shading to indicate that it's a ball rather than a flat circle. |
Posted By: Partack
Date Posted: 09 November 2011 at 3:56pm
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yeah, what Lathien said..
the composition needs reworking. I thought it was slime and a weird circle thing too.. The grass, once you said it was grass, kinda looked like grass.. but it didn't make me think "tennis court" even once I knew what the picture was.. Couldn't hurt to make the TV look a little cooler than a rectangle either.. maybe give it some rounded edges? even slightly.. and improve the TV stand (Although this looks like a monitor.. not a TV.. because the stand is very tall.) maybe slope the top of the base a little? Have another go, K? |
Posted By: Aastikya
Date Posted: 09 November 2011 at 10:16pm
| Thanks for replies. I'll work on grass and ball. But what Patrack said.. 3d TVs look similar to the one I made. I might need to shade the things. |
Posted By: Aastikya
Date Posted: 09 November 2011 at 11:06pm
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Here is an update , comments please :)
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Posted By: Partack
Date Posted: 10 November 2011 at 9:26am
Oh muuch much better. Great work 
there is a problem now though, isn't there.. it's not very 3D and so the original concept has not been fulfilled.. No time to comment right now, I'll be back later and edit this message then. Edit#1: just before leaving I noticed the tennis ball on the bottom right, I couldn't discern the tennis ball from the..... wavey thing behind it.. The tennis ball looks great by the way, it's just it's got so much going on behind it i couldn't tell what that was.. I thought it was a tennis player inside the TV at first and didn't even see the ball shape. |
Posted By: Aastikya
Date Posted: 12 November 2011 at 7:28am
| I made that wavey thing to show some speed of the ball. |
Posted By: Lathien
Date Posted: 12 November 2011 at 10:09am
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Better, but still not quite readable enough. The tennis court within the television is just two white lines and although once you say it's a tennis court, if you dont it's still just two white lines. So again I suggest a player on screen. For the ball, you need to make it a lot bigger to give the impression it is flying out of the screen, which will also help with the readability on the speed trail behind it, which is a good idea btw. And I don't think 3D TVs actually have 3D written on them... |
Posted By: Friend
Date Posted: 12 November 2011 at 12:51pm
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if a player is a too much, you could always have a racquet behind the ball to really show it is being hit "out" of the tv |