Crying Afro
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 11 September 2025 at 8:25pm
Topic: Crying Afro
Posted By: Aastikya
Subject: Crying Afro
Date Posted: 07 November 2011 at 6:57am
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/228/afro.gif/">
Critiques are always welcome. What can I fix or add to post it to PJ gallery? |
Replies:
Posted By: Christoballs
Date Posted: 07 November 2011 at 10:58am
| I don't know, what do you want to do with this? |
Posted By: coolsarahkry
Date Posted: 07 November 2011 at 3:15pm
| His arms are too thin and short. Arms usually fall almost to the knees. |
Posted By: Aastikya
Date Posted: 08 November 2011 at 6:15am
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I was trying to solve the shading problem of shirt and hair. The hair need to be look more like afro than simple. Also, thanks for pointing out the arm problem coolsarahkry.
Here is update:- http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/442/afrox.gif/"> 
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Posted By: cure
Date Posted: 08 November 2011 at 7:41am
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arms are short (as has been pointed out), hairline is unnatural. too circular, and falls too far back on the sides. coat area looks washed-out, needs more contrast. looks like you saved as the wrong file type this last time and the image quality was ruined, so there's some cleaning to do. be careful not to start too many WIP threads at once, stay focused. |