A Sunset Life
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Category: Pixel Art
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Printed Date: 11 September 2025 at 5:34pm
Topic: A Sunset Life
Posted By: Aastikya
Subject: A Sunset Life
Date Posted: 11 January 2012 at 6:48am
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This is a Pixel Scene of a Sunset in which a Girl is walking in a watery area with a Pitcher on her head and an animal beside.
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Posted By: Manupix
Date Posted: 11 January 2012 at 10:36am
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Needs much, much brighter highlights! Also the sun is far bigger than real-life, considering the angle of view more or less implied by the foreground. I just http://www.flickr.com/search/?q=sunset&f=hp - posted this in another thread, might as well post it again ;) |
Posted By: Aastikya
Date Posted: 14 January 2012 at 9:42am
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Posted By: Aastikya
Date Posted: 21 January 2012 at 8:40am
Edited some stuff. |
Posted By: Zeratanus
Date Posted: 21 January 2012 at 9:28am
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Well, you essentially did nothing about anything manupix said, but the palm tree does look a lot better at least also, may be harder with this palette, but a strong directional light will create stronger, darker, longer shadows. I also cant see any break between the sand and water, or if theres water covering the whole area. |