The "tread tank"
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 10 September 2025 at 6:10pm
Topic: The "tread tank"
Posted By: Evil_Genius
Subject: The "tread tank"
Date Posted: 10 January 2006 at 2:46pm
Hello guys, I'm new here (in the forums and in the pixel art) and I'm creating a tank (of course that is simple), please c&c... It 's not already finished. |
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Posted By: randomblink
Date Posted: 10 January 2006 at 2:51pm
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1) It looks too tall 2) Too many turrets on top 3) I like the engine on back, but you should grime it up... Add some rust, some chrome, maybe throw in some smoke 4) The body is WAY too clean 5) The ladder looks like a stack of pegs with space in between Try adding some dimension to the ladder with more shadows, or rust and dirt. Good luck to you tho. Welcome to the board in fact... We are happy to see new members... Peace! ------------- www.randomblink.com I am me... no! Really! |
Posted By: Shark
Date Posted: 10 January 2006 at 2:53pm
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up the contrast, make it less blocky and add a more definitive lightsource. ------------- Snark, we love yuu. |
Posted By: randomblink
Date Posted: 10 January 2006 at 2:56pm
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um... Yeah, what he said...! ------------- www.randomblink.com I am me... no! Really! |
Posted By: dr.feng
Date Posted: 10 January 2006 at 3:08pm
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i guess one of the mainproblems for newbies is to choose the right size
for their piece. A 64x32 px tank in 7 colours is bloodyhard work if u
want him to look good. a piece in the dimensions u choosed for your
tank needs days probably weeks of work and tons of knowledge to make
him look real good. my suggestion: start up small, like in the dimensions i told above. :-) ------------- http://www.vectory.mybin.biz |
Posted By: Evil_Genius
Date Posted: 10 January 2006 at 4:10pm
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Thanks! By the way, do you guys have any link to sites with tutorials about creating dust, lighting and etc ? |
Posted By: Monkey 'o Doom
Date Posted: 10 January 2006 at 4:11pm
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http://www.spriteart.com/ - http://www.spriteart.com/ Here ya go. ------------- http://pixelmonkey.ensellitis.com"> 
RPG is numberwang. |
