Critque my first Pixel art?
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Category: Pixel Art
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Topic: Critque my first Pixel art?
Posted By: Atynine
Subject: Critque my first Pixel art?
Date Posted: 23 March 2012 at 12:59pm
Thanks in advance
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Posted By: jambox_josh
Date Posted: 23 March 2012 at 1:04pm
| image shack is decent enough |
Posted By: Atynine
Date Posted: 23 March 2012 at 1:05pm
| It's not loading for me, but oh well. |
Posted By: Partack
Date Posted: 23 March 2012 at 1:43pm
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sod all that.
use http://imgur.com/ |
Posted By: reis
Date Posted: 23 March 2012 at 2:08pm
| Error on the image |
Posted By: Atynine
Date Posted: 23 March 2012 at 2:28pm
| Added a direct link, in case the image doesn't work(It didn't work for 3 different sites) |
Posted By: Partack
Date Posted: 23 March 2012 at 2:30pm
imgur worked.
use [ img] http://i.imgur.com/SCAn2.png [ /img] (without spaces) to show your works directly. I like the eyeball especially. the dithering on the rest of it makes it look a little flat though, maybe you'll want to consider using your darker shade to only show deep rounded parts? nice and clean lineart though. I suggest maybe making your eyeball shinier by removing some of the dithering, keping it the whitish gray and using a white square/circle ( if you can manage one) to convey a speck of light and make it look shiny/glassy. Anyway. good job. |
Posted By: Atynine
Date Posted: 23 March 2012 at 2:36pm
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Thanks. I noticed it looked kinda flat once I finished, I'll re-do the shading in a few minutes to fix it.
Also, I posted the image the way you suggested, but it didn't work. Edit: I guess I can't do [IMG ]? |
Posted By: Atynine
Date Posted: 24 March 2012 at 4:04am
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Is this any better?(At not being as flat) It is in my eye.
pictures:L 
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Posted By: jeremy
Date Posted: 24 March 2012 at 4:39am
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imgur gives the option of clicking ready-made IMG tags Just copy/paste it. 
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Posted By: Atynine
Date Posted: 24 March 2012 at 6:04am
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Originally posted by Jeremy
imgur gives the option of clicking ready-made IMG tagsJust copy/paste it.
Oh wow I'm stupid... Thanks:P |