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Rock Monster

Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
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Printed Date: 12 September 2025 at 12:25am


Topic: Rock Monster
Posted By: A2J2TIWARI
Subject: Rock Monster
Date Posted: 17 June 2012 at 1:21am
Hello everyone!

This is a rock monster I made:
  

It's supposed to look like this:
http://www.husvankempen.de/nunn/archiv/fantasy/logos/ErdelementLev3.jpg - http://www.husvankempen.de/nunn/archiv/fantasy/logos/ErdelementLev3.jpg

Tell me what you think.

C and C welcome!

Thanking everyone in advance.

~Ultimate



Replies:
Posted By: yaomon17
Date Posted: 17 June 2012 at 7:27am
I really can't tell what it is suppose to be from the pixel art alone. Try to improve the readability by adding recognizable shapes such as fingers. Also, I really think Eyes will improve the readability even though it is not shown in the concept. Good luck.



Posted By: A2J2TIWARI
Date Posted: 19 June 2012 at 9:09am
Thanks for reply Yaomon! It really helped!

Well here is an edit based on your and Cyangmou's edit/advice/suggestion!




This is an example to ask if I am going in right direction and perspective looks okay? If it looks good I'll change this piece to 64*64 and fix lines and add shading.



Posted By: AirStyle
Date Posted: 19 June 2012 at 10:00am
Try to imagine a human torso and then build rocks around it. Right now, you have him barrel-chested.

Take another look at Yaomon's; the rocks take a general shape of a human torso. Then as it is bent into your perspective, you notice that the torso-like shape still remains. Yours over-emphasizes the shoulders, without considering the latissimus dorsi muscles, located on the far and right sides of the back (Google that name for a better idea of the muscle I'm referring to).

Take another look that the musculature of the human body, and then use that as inspiration.



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