Robot [Beginner pixel artist]
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Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 22 February 2026 at 6:33pm
Topic: Robot [Beginner pixel artist]
Posted By: Zorg
Subject: Robot [Beginner pixel artist]
Date Posted: 31 July 2012 at 10:41pm
This is the first pixel piece I've actually been somewhat happy with and would actually consider showing. I would really like constructive criticism on how to improve this and maybe help with ways to start on, say, a bigger piece. |
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Posted By: Yuran
Date Posted: 31 July 2012 at 11:42pm
| Do the shadows a little bit brighter |
Posted By: Mr.Fahrenheit
Date Posted: 01 August 2012 at 5:06am
| I would actually say increase the contrast a little bit more. |
Posted By: Zorg
Date Posted: 01 August 2012 at 10:31am
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Do you think this is better?
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Old:
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Posted By: Jumble
Date Posted: 01 August 2012 at 12:37pm
| The new one is a lot better in readability. |
Posted By: Yuran
Date Posted: 02 August 2012 at 7:39pm
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Originally posted by Yuran
Do the shadows a little bit brighter Google stupid and I am too :) Take a darker shade, not enough contrast (iron, it reflects glare vmozhestvo) To begin with try to make a shadow, it is flat Сделай темнее тени, не хватает контрастов (железо, оно отражает вможество бликов) Для начала попробуй сделать тень, он плоский |