My First Real Attempt
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Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
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Printed Date: 12 September 2025 at 12:01pm
Topic: My First Real Attempt
Posted By: Delerat
Subject: My First Real Attempt
Date Posted: 11 August 2012 at 9:16pm
(Image is scaled 200% so it's easier to see) So this is my first real attempt at making some pixel art and so far I'm pleased which has me motivated, but I'm feeling like I could use some feedback, especially on the shading. Specifically, I'm not sure if I've done a good job bringing attention to the relaxing guy's arm. I tried some lighting on the under part of his arm, but I'm not sure it looks good. Also, I feel like the light source would only touch the side of the palm tree that you can't see, but I find it looks odd without light on it. Any feedback would be great! :D |
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Posted By: Yuran
Date Posted: 11 August 2012 at 10:35pm
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Good job, I like it,
to light on these small details can not much bother. And on the form must be oboratit more attention and spend more time. Not a beautiful tree, I have to keep in mind, its leaves, make them more like other palm leaves. But do not overdo it with much of detail them, man lying on a chaise lounge to attract more attention than the diversity of palm leaves. Background white ... |
Posted By: LachieD
Date Posted: 12 August 2012 at 10:04am
| I would crop everything around the man and the tree and concentrate on refining them. Yuran gives good advises. |