(C&C Needed)Syosa Inspired
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Category: Pixel Art
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Printed Date: 10 September 2025 at 3:26pm
Topic: (C&C Needed)Syosa Inspired
Posted By: A2J2TIWARI
Subject: (C&C Needed)Syosa Inspired
Date Posted: 08 March 2013 at 8:25am
 Today when I was browsing PixelJoint gallery I found this piece by Syosa: http://www.pixeljoint.com/pixelart/54100.htm I have bought my brand new Bamboo One tablet and wanted t get used to it. I've used Dawnbringer's palette for this piece. Please help me making this better C&C Needed |
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Posted By: AtskaHeart
Date Posted: 08 March 2013 at 8:41am
| It will look a bit weird if the bottom isn't animated :/. Besides, I'd recommend more color mixes considering you are using DB's colors, results will be awesome prolly :). |
Posted By: A2J2TIWARI
Date Posted: 09 March 2013 at 5:37am
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Posted By: crozier
Date Posted: 09 March 2013 at 9:22am
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Better. Much better.
The gun is raising in some rather odd areas. It looks to be made of rubber or something like that. I would also suggest using a dark brown (or even a normal brown) instead of a black for the outline. And her mouth on the gas-mask is strange and protruding. |
Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 09 March 2013 at 10:42am
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Too close to the original. Try making it more your thing while keeping the inspiration. ------------- |
Posted By: Hapiel
Date Posted: 09 March 2013 at 12:12pm
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Are you aware that the head is almost 1/3 of the body? and in realistic works this is like 1/8? Study references of gas masks and hair! ------------- |