WIP Mockup - Would really like help!
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Topic: WIP Mockup - Would really like help!
Posted By: Bryroz
Subject: WIP Mockup - Would really like help!
Date Posted: 20 April 2013 at 3:05pm
I was wondering how can I improve this. This is the first mockup I have ever done so, I would really like some CC. Thanks! |
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Posted By: Hapiel
Date Posted: 21 April 2013 at 3:58pm
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Hi Bryroz, I think your character is hard to read because it blends with the mountain on the background. A very easy trick is to give him a black outline, or prevent him from ever being in front of a dark BG! What is the material underneath the dirt? Why is it so bright? Detail can be nice, but I think in this case it is distractiing from what we should focus on, which is the character! Good luck on this! Interesting unique work on the sky, keep it that way :D ------------- |