Vader WIP
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 09 September 2025 at 9:49pm
Topic: Vader WIP
Posted By: {TGH}Jedi-Sam
Subject: Vader WIP
Date Posted: 08 February 2006 at 6:44pm
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hey guys, tell me what you think about my rough vader sketch:
also, can some1 help with the neck? there is supposed to be a chain there, but it looks like a rope, so any help with that would also be apreciated. Thx! ------------- The Glitch Hunters www.freewebs.com/theglitchhunters - www.freewebs.com/theglitchhunters Finding Glitches For A Better Tomorrow. |
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Posted By: alkaline
Date Posted: 08 February 2006 at 6:57pm
| the whole thing looks quite squished in. |
Posted By: {TGH}Jedi-Sam
Date Posted: 08 February 2006 at 7:13pm
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What do you mean by "squished in?" do you mean it is to long, like... like this: ------->(picture)<--------- sry its hard to explain but like what do you mean?
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Posted By: leel
Date Posted: 08 February 2006 at 7:14pm
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I think he means that it's too tall and not wide enough, at least that's what it looks like to me |
Posted By: {TGH}Jedi-Sam
Date Posted: 08 February 2006 at 7:27pm
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does this seem less squished?
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Posted By: alkaline
Date Posted: 08 February 2006 at 7:29pm
| I mean the whole thing still looks too thin..try widening the face and making everything wider. <--(vader)--> |
Posted By: PixelSnader
Date Posted: 08 February 2006 at 7:38pm
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thats cuz he didnt crop the helmet vertically ------------- ▄▄█ ▄▄█ ▄█▄ ▄█▄ |
Posted By: 7fags
Date Posted: 08 February 2006 at 8:13pm
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Posted By: {TGH}Jedi-Sam
Date Posted: 08 February 2006 at 9:33pm
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that actually isn't the picture i got it from. i always draw cartoon vaders so my pictures are where i got the sketch from Edit: is this any less long and squished?
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Posted By: Pixel_Outlaw
Date Posted: 08 February 2006 at 9:53pm
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The eyes are far to high then
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Posted By: Shark
Date Posted: 08 February 2006 at 11:24pm
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the mouth triangle ios too big. ------------- Snark, we love yuu. |
Posted By: {TGH}Jedi-Sam
Date Posted: 09 February 2006 at 5:50am
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here is an update. tell me what you think. ------------- The Glitch Hunters www.freewebs.com/theglitchhunters - www.freewebs.com/theglitchhunters Finding Glitches For A Better Tomorrow. |
Posted By: Pixel_Outlaw
Date Posted: 09 February 2006 at 9:39am
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Much better. The eyes are rounded not triangles, but i bet you were aware of that, anyways if the eyes wererounded it would add depth. Just round the tops and keep the bottttttttom flat. ------------- http://www.shmup-dev.com/forum/">
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Posted By: {TGH}Jedi-Sam
Date Posted: 09 February 2006 at 2:18pm
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sweet. is the helmet too big tho? it kinda looks a bit big but im not sure ------------- The Glitch Hunters www.freewebs.com/theglitchhunters - www.freewebs.com/theglitchhunters Finding Glitches For A Better Tomorrow. |