Fighter WIP
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
URL: https://pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=1630
Printed Date: 11 October 2022 at 2:39am
Topic: Fighter WIP
Posted By: Dash
Subject: Fighter WIP
Date Posted: 09 February 2006 at 10:49am
Hmm, I'm not that much of a pixel artist but sometimes I like to do a few art pieces here and there... Need help on this one:
I need extreme criticism!!!! 
Update:  ------------- http://www.daretogame.com - DTG Live! A 8-bit style free MMORPG |
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Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 09 February 2006 at 10:57am
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the fingers look wonky
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Posted By: Dash
Date Posted: 09 February 2006 at 11:04am
haha thats not what i meant by "extreme"  ------------- http://www.daretogame.com - DTG Live! A 8-bit style free MMORPG |
Posted By: Souly
Date Posted: 09 February 2006 at 11:50am
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But the fingers do look wonky!!! ------------- 
I am the jesus of PJ. |
Posted By: Larwick
Date Posted: 09 February 2006 at 11:56am
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The shading on his STOMACH gives the impression that it's twisted horribly >.< The legs also dont look right, but i have nothing to suggest there. Also, his crotch seems to have a huge GASH in it. Yeeey. *sighs* hope that helps. -------------  http://larw-ck.deviantart.com">
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Also, if i were you i'd not have his right hand look the same as his left (pose wise), it doesnt really look right against his chest (sorta looks like he's got a pocket on his chest... ouch), i would suggest a fist or something. I'm liking the hair. heheh.Posted By: Dash
Date Posted: 11 February 2006 at 12:27am
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Update:
I changed the whole upper body and fixed the crotch area on the pants. Basically, my fighter fights with his wristbones, so he basically always has his palms open to expose the wrists.. ------------- http://www.daretogame.com - DTG Live! A 8-bit style free MMORPG |
Posted By: PatBBNT
Date Posted: 11 February 2006 at 12:32am
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Good Job Dash!!! Pat |
Posted By: Omegavolt
Date Posted: 13 February 2006 at 5:48am
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Just a quick input from me, but you might want to change the light source on his face to match the one on the rest of his body. |