[WIP] Capitalist
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Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 10 June 2026 at 1:23am
Topic: [WIP] Capitalist
Posted By: shelin
Subject: [WIP] Capitalist
Date Posted: 06 June 2013 at 7:27am
I'm stuck. Something is wrong with this pixel but I totally don't know what.  So I'm asking for advice. |
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Posted By: Muxaun
Date Posted: 06 June 2013 at 10:40am
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I am a beginner really, but..
1) the pipe on the hat looks like it is a part of another picture - it is not connected to him 2) hes right part shall be thinner because he is rotated a bit. Here is a quick example of what I mean. 
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Posted By: Kurieta
Date Posted: 06 June 2013 at 11:03am
| I too am a beginner, but I think the monacle blends too much with the surrounding skin. That popped out to me as soon as I saw it. You might want to give the shoes a little bit more depth as they seem a tad flat right now, and the hands could use a little shading. Great work though! |
Posted By: shelin
Date Posted: 06 June 2013 at 1:24pm
| dunno, I think lineart is quite good but something is wrong with colours or shading |
Posted By: Friend
Date Posted: 06 June 2013 at 1:52pm
| Yes, the colors suffer from lack of contrast. Make the colors more vibrant and popping. Also, the contrast in the shading needs to be greater. Try hue shifting (make the deeper tones more purple and the brighter tones more yellow) to make the colors less boring |
Posted By: shelin
Date Posted: 07 June 2013 at 3:50am
I know theory but it's hard to me to do this on his brown tailcoat.  |