(Beginner) Egoraptor
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Topic: (Beginner) Egoraptor
Posted By: TheSchaeff
Subject: (Beginner) Egoraptor
Date Posted: 14 January 2014 at 2:29pm
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Hey!
I just joined a few minutes ago, and was looking for some feedback on this Egoraptor sprite I've been working on. 
I know it's not perfect, and if anyone could help improve it I'd really appreciate it. I've been trying to just stick with base colors and shadows to go with the cartoony style. Thanks! |
Replies:
Posted By: Velrio
Date Posted: 14 January 2014 at 2:53pm
| I can't offer much in the way of advice, but hey, it made me laugh some. |
Posted By: skittle
Date Posted: 15 January 2014 at 7:54am
| Hey, one thing I noticed is that the shading on his face is a bit funky (and in a weird way :P). The shadow should be at the left side of his face not his right. There should only be a little bit of shadow that the hair casts on the right, just not a load of it. |
Posted By: TheSchaeff
Date Posted: 15 January 2014 at 10:33am
| Now that you mentioned it ADrawingMan, there is a lot of shadow on the right. Will fix when I get the chance, thanks! |
Posted By: Metaru
Date Posted: 16 January 2014 at 12:03am
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to be honest, if you're going to mimic these cartoon-esque versions they use on their intros, you dont need shading at all. ------------- I ate leel's babies |