A logo for my web..
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Topic: A logo for my web..
Posted By: matriax
Subject: A logo for my web..
Date Posted: 16 March 2006 at 10:50am
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I making a logo like this "demoscene" for my website. You can view the process in images here: http://videotuts.webcindario.com/demoscene/1Demoscenep1.gif - http://videotuts.webcindario.com/demoscene/1Demoscenep1.gif http://videotuts.webcindario.com/demoscene/1Demoscenep2.gif - http://videotuts.webcindario.com/demoscene/1Demoscenep2.gif http://videotuts.webcindario.com/demoscene/1Demoscenep3.gif - http://videotuts.webcindario.com/demoscene/1Demoscenep3.gif http://videotuts.webcindario.com/demoscene/1Demoscenep4.gif - http://videotuts.webcindario.com/demoscene/1Demoscenep4.gif http://videotuts.webcindario.com/demoscene/1Demoscenep5.gif - http://videotuts.webcindario.com/demoscene/1Demoscenep5.gif http://videotuts.webcindario.com/demoscene/1Demoscenep6.gif - http://videotuts.webcindario.com/demoscene/1Demoscenep6.gif http://videotuts.webcindario.com/demoscene/1Demoscenep7.gif - http://videotuts.webcindario.com/demoscene/1Demoscenep7.gif http://videotuts.webcindario.com/demoscene/1Demoscenep8.gif - http://videotuts.webcindario.com/demoscene/1Demoscenep8.gif And this is the the last i made: http://videotuts.webcindario.com/demoscene/1Demoscenep9.gif"> What you think? C+c plz. ------------- My Team: http://www.TayKrOn.com - http://www.TayKrOn.com TayKrOn Blog: http://taykrongames.blogspot.com - http://taykrongames.blogspot.com |
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Posted By: Sibix
Date Posted: 16 March 2006 at 11:02am
| i dont think the enter fits in with the piece. the moon is nice.. maybe add some randomstars in the bg |
Posted By: matriax
Date Posted: 16 March 2006 at 1:35pm
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Well another update: http://videotuts.webcindario.com/demoscene/1Demoscenep10.gif"> Sibix, well the enter is provisional but i think is good and believe the final image will be with this style of enter, but i making another variantas. Thanks for the comment. ------------- My Team: http://www.TayKrOn.com - http://www.TayKrOn.com TayKrOn Blog: http://taykrongames.blogspot.com - http://taykrongames.blogspot.com |
Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 16 March 2006 at 8:27pm
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It is technically made well and the colors work well, I would say it's
too over the top. The pages better be banging cause with this splash
page your site could easily be dissappointing. The enter typestyle is
not a good choice for this style, and the reflection is overkill. The
new clouds with the lightning are not needed, it's like a whole scene
and distracts from the page objective (enter). The copy is overdone a
bit too. You've got a pinball over the eye, an amethyst on the X and
pearls or something on the T, all extras that take away from the impact
of this stylized display font. The 2006 is over decorated to the point
of invisibility. Are dandelions really needed on the grass? A comet
fits well but you went with four of them, one of which has wings, again
over the top. I suggest you take an objective look at your splash page
before going with it.
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Posted By: hawken
Date Posted: 16 March 2006 at 11:53pm
glad you got the psgnosis owl in! 
------------- http://hawken.dadako.com/skillset.pixel.php?page=main - my pixel page! |
Posted By: fil_razorback
Date Posted: 17 March 2006 at 12:56am
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Jalonso is not wrong...I had watched the scene for about one minute without READING the text :/
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Posted By: Psychotic_Carp
Date Posted: 17 March 2006 at 5:21am
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I agree about the "enter" part, remove it and add standard text for entering the site, the rest of it was very well done -------------  got game?
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Posted By: matriax
Date Posted: 17 March 2006 at 6:12am
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Well new update. Yes, yes, is posible, I erase de bubbles... (i don't understand why all the people hate de bubbles XDD ) I change th fairy of the left and put into de point of "I". and adder more reflect of gras and... the iluminated "T" (not finished yet). http://videotuts.webcindario.com/demoscene/1Demoscenep11.gif"> C+C plz ------------- My Team: http://www.TayKrOn.com - http://www.TayKrOn.com TayKrOn Blog: http://taykrongames.blogspot.com - http://taykrongames.blogspot.com |
Posted By: PixelSnader
Date Posted: 17 March 2006 at 10:47am
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personally, i dón't like the diversity of styles you have in there. its not working together well, it appears as 5 or 6 different pieces mashed together. there's no neat flow/transistion between the T and other letters styles for instance, and the background is a whole other level too. what i dó like is that you have achieved great detail with little colours, and not make it appear overly monochromatic. the rendering things (AA and such) are allso well executed. ------------- ▄▄█ ▄▄█ ▄█▄ ▄█▄ |
Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 17 March 2006 at 2:07pm
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Originally posted by matriax ...Well new update...C+C plz.. It seems you are really looking for P+EG (praise and ego stroking) ------------- |
Posted By: Monkey 'o Doom
Date Posted: 17 March 2006 at 2:21pm
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Don't you mean P+ES? ------------- http://pixelmonkey.ensellitis.com"> 
RPG is numberwang. |
Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 17 March 2006 at 2:29pm
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It seems you are really looking for P+ES thanks MoD ------------- |
Posted By: matriax
Date Posted: 17 March 2006 at 2:40pm
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Originally posted by jalonso
It seems you are really looking for P+ES thanks MoD ¿? Sorry i dont understand, what is P+ES ¿? ------------- My Team: http://www.TayKrOn.com - http://www.TayKrOn.com TayKrOn Blog: http://taykrongames.blogspot.com - http://taykrongames.blogspot.com |
Posted By: ..::Naso::..
Date Posted: 17 March 2006 at 11:09pm
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Originally posted by jalonso
(praise and ego stroking) |
Posted By: Saboteur
Date Posted: 17 March 2006 at 11:11pm
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The new "T" is, and I quote, "Ick" ------------- "I was minding my own business and walking across a pebbled path, and a Duck started giving me the business." |
Posted By: Andy Tran
Date Posted: 18 March 2006 at 12:35am
| Interesting update. I love the moon and water reflection to it. |
Posted By: Shark
Date Posted: 18 March 2006 at 1:28am
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the best part of this is the ball on the 'I'. i dont really like the T, but
the little glowing things all over are cool. i liked the bubbles btw. ------------- Snark, we love yuu. |