CHALLENGE 3/31/2014: Bait and Switch
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Topic: CHALLENGE 3/31/2014: Bait and Switch
Posted By: administrator
Subject: CHALLENGE 3/31/2014: Bait and Switch
Date Posted: 31 March 2014 at 12:01am
Replies:
Posted By: PIXELNACHO
Date Posted: 31 March 2014 at 5:38pm
Hello, this is Santodiablo
16 x 16px, 11 colors |
Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 31 March 2014 at 6:18pm
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Originally posted by NACHOSLAVE Hello, this is Santodiablo
16 x 16px, 11 colors  ------------- |
Posted By: Lapada
Date Posted: 31 March 2014 at 9:45pm
I gota too busy last week but I'll make it THIS TIME! >.>;;
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Posted By: RoCroft
Date Posted: 01 April 2014 at 6:41am
Here my WIP, still have to do a lot of work :)
Nice work Lapada!! This will be my first pixel art ever so pls give me some constructive criticism |
Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 01 April 2014 at 6:45am
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@RoCroft, You have to clean those lines. Also you are using 8 colors but hardly any of them show up. Increase the contrast in your palette.
See and review cure's pixelart and the noobtorial threads in the resource section if you have not already. ------------- |
Posted By: RoCroft
Date Posted: 01 April 2014 at 7:23am
| @jalonso, thx for your tips, i will look up the tutorial, havn't seen it yes. And i will add more contrast in my palette, thx for your tips! |
Posted By: Otto
Date Posted: 01 April 2014 at 10:42am
This is my idea, I hope the two frames are distinct enough, for as you can see the only change is that "she" closes her fan
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Posted By: r1k
Date Posted: 01 April 2014 at 3:10pm
wont be finishing this cause Im working on commissions instead, but just quickly sketched up an idea, |
Posted By: CELS
Date Posted: 02 April 2014 at 1:07am
Too much? |
Posted By: Gecimen
Date Posted: 02 April 2014 at 8:48am
| excellent :) |
Posted By: Mino
Date Posted: 02 April 2014 at 12:53pm
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Originally posted by Otto
This is my idea, I hope the two frames are distinct enough, for as you can see the only change is that "she" closes her fan
haha, reminds me of something you'd see in warioware |
Posted By: Otto
Date Posted: 04 April 2014 at 6:55am
@Mino, I hadn't thought of that, but you are right! I might still change a few things, here and there... |
Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 04 April 2014 at 7:02am
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@Otto, I like your idea for the most part but have some crits.
*The corner of the face with the fan over it maybe should be in the reds because she's just hiding not morphing. *The highlight of the chest is very harsh on the left side...right side too but not that much. *The hair to face without fan looks wrong to me. Maybe a bit of ears or some hair in the back will better set the face. * Something is just unladylike with the whole neck area, or lack of neck area. * The ruffles in the elbows look different in that one reads scalloped and the other straight edged. * Because of the period depicted maybe a fleur-de-lys would be better than hearts in the BG? * WHAT IS THAT GREEN AA COLOR FOR? o.O ------------- |
Posted By: Otto
Date Posted: 04 April 2014 at 1:02pm
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@jalonso Thanks a lot for the feedback! I have made a new version considering what you said. I have opened the fan a little bit more to completely hide the face I am not sure what you mean by the chest, I have changed a bit the colours, do you mean that it is too light? I have changed a bit the hair to set the face better, I have seen in images that those wigs had often hair hanging over the ears, so I added that. I have tried to correct the neck area And the ruffles I prefer hearts just to make fun (I want to entitle it something like "kiss me") And finally, yes, I do have a problem with AA between different colours, I never know how to do it (I just put one of the shades of blue instead of green) Here is the picture  |
Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 04 April 2014 at 1:55pm
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Much nicer :)
I meant the highlight/light edge on the triangle part of her dress. The point of that triangle is not quite where the center would really be (maybe 10 px to the left). Also you have made a diamond pattern that also does not follow the curvature so those things make that light/highlight stand out a lot. I see about the BG and you are right. ------------- |
Posted By: Otto
Date Posted: 04 April 2014 at 3:49pm
I think I know what you mean now. Here is my revised version
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Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 04 April 2014 at 4:06pm
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That's what I meant :D
Why the pink in the border of frame 2? I think the 2nd frame could use being up for less time, try half. ------------- |
Posted By: Otto
Date Posted: 05 April 2014 at 1:56am
Here it is I don't know much about animations, but I made this one for the preview  |