2d cross section image
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Category: Pixel Art
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Printed Date: 11 September 2025 at 11:38am
Topic: 2d cross section image
Posted By: CakeDrake
Subject: 2d cross section image
Date Posted: 05 June 2014 at 4:33pm
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I made a commision for the 16 tons challenge, but it was lacking a lot, so I decided to make a second one trying to improve :P http://www.pixeljoint.com/pixelart/86407.htm - Old image
Tell me what to improve :) 
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Replies:
Posted By: skittle
Date Posted: 05 June 2014 at 5:13pm
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It looks interesting, but atm I'm kind of confused to as what is going on. Is it meant to be a top down view?
I do however dig the colour palette a lot. |
Posted By: CakeDrake
Date Posted: 06 June 2014 at 3:27am
| Imagine you are looking at something cut in halve: http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/d/d7/Granny_smith_and_cross_section.jpg - cut in halve apple |
Posted By: skittle
Date Posted: 06 June 2014 at 3:37am
| Ah, I saw that you were redoing the piece, I didn't realize you were still going with the actual cross section view, my bad. |
Posted By: SuperTurnip
Date Posted: 06 June 2014 at 1:21pm
| I like the colors! I think to really get a "cross-section" feel, use more context clues like dangling vines to show where gravity is pointing. The overlapping dirt looks awesome, and it might be good to use it in more places. Finally, show the room receding backwards with perspective. It may be a cross-section, but space still exists! I look forward to see where this goes. |
Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 06 June 2014 at 2:49pm
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I like the original and this looks nice but it is hard to read atm. ------------- |
Posted By: CakeDrake
Date Posted: 08 June 2014 at 3:31pm
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I don't feel like I'm getting anywhere with this... I'm not going to finish this. Sorry to waste your time :/
But thnx for the cc, apreciate it :D |