A title too long (wip)
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Printed Date: 14 September 2025 at 2:37am
Topic: A title too long (wip)
Posted By: Shadowgamers
Subject: A title too long (wip)
Date Posted: 12 April 2006 at 10:52pm
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The original title is "And then it killed me, And I, by some stretch of chance, returned the favor", which I'm not diggin' at the moment, but its the best I can come up with.. Its smallish, because I like to try small things.  Also, I suck at guns. (blech, help on the would be appreciated...) I'll add color, detail and a background later... |
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Posted By: Blick
Date Posted: 13 April 2006 at 12:56am
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When it comes to pistols, the actual handle part of the gun is
surprisingly long. Nearly as long as the barrel. Also, your barrel is
too long. Interesting WIP so far, I'll be looking forward to seeing how
it turns out.
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Posted By: Shadowgamers
Date Posted: 13 April 2006 at 3:21am
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Originally posted by Blick When it comes to pistols, the actual handle part of the gun is surprisingly long. Nearly as long as the barrel. Also, your barrel is too long. Time for some gun referencing. TO GOOGLE, HO!. edit: and have at you a shoddy interpritation of light before I start to colour it... (with a barrel edit)  |
Posted By: J.A.M
Date Posted: 13 April 2006 at 5:38am
| It's looking interesting, but what exactly is it that has impaled him? |
Posted By: Shadowgamers
Date Posted: 13 April 2006 at 6:12am
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Originally posted by J.A.M It's looking interesting, but what exactly is it that has impaled him? My horriblley designed character I dubbed "Delgeist" ( http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/3170/delgeistbyshadowgamers9gs.jpg - heres a larger picture, not that it provides any more help ) |
Posted By: Boder
Date Posted: 13 April 2006 at 10:56am
| This is very awesome. |
Posted By: Saiklor
Date Posted: 13 April 2006 at 11:36am
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just don't forget that things cast shadows to block the light. ie on his thigh, on the ground, etc. love the wip stages you're showing us, quite fun and educational, thanks! ------------- www.semesteratsea.com |
Posted By: Saboteur
Date Posted: 13 April 2006 at 2:17pm
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Duuuude. I want to read whatever thats a title for. And sweet wip, man. Liking the character annnd the gore an' stuff.
------------- "I was minding my own business and walking across a pebbled path, and a Duck started giving me the business." |
Posted By: Shadowgamers
Date Posted: 14 April 2006 at 3:07am
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Originally posted by Saboteur Duuuude. I want to read whatever thats a title for. Originally posted by Shadowgamers The original title is "And then it killed me, And I, by some stretch of chance, returned the favor"  Started on the horrible colour job, I'll start adding background details before I start going into detailing the colour with light sources and stuffs |
Posted By: PixelSnader
Date Posted: 14 April 2006 at 6:52pm
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i thought he was holding a sawn off shotgun.. oh well.. 1 - the grey will look ptryy boring in the end i think. give it some slight hue. light blue usually looks good on something white 2 - where does the bullet exit? either the impaler is make of something pretty bulletproof, or the bullet is very weak right now. waiting to see this unfold ps. i liked the other, linked delgeist better, it looks more like a creature ------------- ▄▄█ ▄▄█ ▄█▄ ▄█▄ |