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first fighter sprite

Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 10 September 2025 at 11:38pm


Topic: first fighter sprite
Posted By: Sibix
Subject: first fighter sprite
Date Posted: 04 May 2005 at 9:52am
yeh this is as the title says my first fighter sprite.

how could i improve it.


Replies:
Posted By: Sibix
Date Posted: 05 May 2005 at 10:18am
could someone please comment

Posted By: pixelblink
Date Posted: 05 May 2005 at 11:37am

no need to comment on your own thread like that dude... it'll get commented on in time... you just can't expect everyone to jump on it right away the same day.

That being said, I think it's a decent sprite with some excellent details. A few things I will point out:
- his pose seems rigid and pointless on the left
- the hair looks weird.. should have some more of it on the right of his head??
- his eyes are quite close to his chin
- perhaps some fine tuning and tweeking of the highlights and shading on his pants

hope that helps :)



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Posted By: sedgemonkey
Date Posted: 05 May 2005 at 12:53pm
The arm posing looks a little unnatural. Maybe you could drop down the left arm a bit.

Posted By: Rifts
Date Posted: 06 May 2005 at 10:46am
i think its all quite good exept the head could use some editing needs
to be a bit bigger or less squashed looking anyways if u get what i
mean


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