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Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 12 September 2025 at 5:56am


Topic: BigBrother
Posted By: Dutrho
Subject: BigBrother
Date Posted: 17 April 2006 at 8:19am
Trying to work only with shadows.
anything I can add, remove, change?



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Posted By: Souly
Date Posted: 17 April 2006 at 8:28am
Maybe an indent at the top of the upper lip?

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Posted By: Dutrho
Date Posted: 17 April 2006 at 8:39am
Like this?




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Posted By: Souly
Date Posted: 17 April 2006 at 8:42am
Hmm, maybe a bit thicker?

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Posted By: Dutrho
Date Posted: 17 April 2006 at 8:51am
a little thicker.




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Posted By: Souly
Date Posted: 17 April 2006 at 9:11am
Now it doesn't look as plain...
I don't really know what you could add to it.

Maybe somtheing near the eyes?
I mean they seem very large but not that visually intresting.


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Posted By: PixelSnader
Date Posted: 17 April 2006 at 9:50am

tis a cool idea, but i think you need more shade and less white. allso try to make it less symmetrical



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Posted By: Dutrho
Date Posted: 18 April 2006 at 7:45am
not sure what you mean about less white

but for the symmetrical, probably the next one I make wont be symmetrical, probably something based off the artwork by KMFDM


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Posted By: EyeCraft
Date Posted: 18 April 2006 at 7:40pm
Originally posted by Dutrho

probably something based off the artwork by KMFDM


Awwwwwww thats a sick idea. The artwork isn't actually done by KMFDM, they enlist this artist, who's also done some covers for other bands, Faith No More's King For A Day, Fool For A Lifetime, for instance

This piece is ok, i think it needs black around it defining more of the head, black perhaps defining the cheekbones.


Posted By: aartuvahliks;
Date Posted: 19 April 2006 at 6:12am
better AA always helps.

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Posted By: Dutrho
Date Posted: 19 April 2006 at 8:21am
tried to soften it a bit further but I hate adding a fift colour to it, is there another way if doing it without adding extra colours that I dont know of?




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Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 19 April 2006 at 8:30am
The cheekbone shape, the straight egde bothers me, seems like their lighting is diff than the rest. Also with this type of *overhead* lighting (?) the thingies between the nose and upper lip would not shadow this way, it would be the center area not the ridge that shadows. The lower lip is not indicated to potrude enough to create such a thick shadow. Also the nose appears to be wide and flat so the shadow would be thicker. Do you have the *face* for this to show? 

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Posted By: Dutrho
Date Posted: 19 April 2006 at 8:38am
the source material for what I'm working on is a mix of these 2 images




the obey logo for the frontal view and the kmfdm poster for the shading


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Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 19 April 2006 at 8:53am
Those are quite conflicting since the Andre the Giant is a stylized silkscreen image utilizing head-on lighting, whereas the KMFDM is top lightning (as I suspected). In this case I would eliminate a color or two and skew the lighting just off-center (like head-on to the side of the nose a bit) to allow for interesting shapes.

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Posted By: Dutrho
Date Posted: 19 April 2006 at 10:06am
yeah I think i'm gonna try that, but tomorow. I hate going to work

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Posted By: Dutrho
Date Posted: 24 April 2006 at 9:00am


this is turning out to be harder than I imagined.
light source left of center.


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Posted By: PixelSnader
Date Posted: 24 April 2006 at 1:50pm
much, much better

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Posted By: Dutrho
Date Posted: 24 April 2006 at 2:46pm
true, but still far from perfect.

i'll keep working on it


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