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Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Topic: lineart
Posted By: kendi64
Subject: lineart
Date Posted: 26 April 2006 at 2:32pm

So I'm trying to do more pixels and wanting to make some figures. Before I go ahead with the coloring (which I'm sure will take a good bit of time) I'm wondering if anyone sees anything really wrong with this lineart I made up before going on as it looks quite complicated with all the trim and spikes and plates on the armor:




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Posted By: Monkey 'o Doom
Date Posted: 26 April 2006 at 2:58pm
Well, I love it, but that pose seems really uncomfortable; no one stands with their legs 3 feet apart. and his body seems farther away than his legs.

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Posted By: Bifur
Date Posted: 26 April 2006 at 4:35pm
the cape seems atached to the floor since it doenst show the contourn of the leg

and yeah porn star pose


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Posted By: MurrMan
Date Posted: 26 April 2006 at 5:34pm
Originally posted by Bifur


and yeah porn star pose

yup, one full clothed and spiky porn star... just the way women like em...


Posted By: Bifur
Date Posted: 26 April 2006 at 6:13pm
Originally posted by MurrMan

Originally posted by Bifur


and yeah porn star pose

yup, one full clothed and spiky porn star... just the way women like em...


was talking about the hand in the leg and bent torso (that's what a porno star does to show off their boobs and stuff)


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Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 26 April 2006 at 9:25pm

I don't work the way you do. I lineart and color at the same time so its hard to tell if something is wrong but will try for you cuz your lineart has potential. As mentioned the leg behing the cape does not make sense, the cape also just abrubtly ends behind his other leg and between the forearm and hip. On the legs I would like for aesthetic reasons if all the *scales* had the same angle. If you don't agree, the second from the boot up is way to thick for the others. The third is way off. The face really shound have a bit of a turn, this head on make his face boring. As for the porn pose I like it, don't know bout the thing hangin tho (hehe). Again color will help visualize. Maybe you could color block it for us to see.



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Posted By: Setzer
Date Posted: 26 April 2006 at 9:44pm
the only flaw I see is his left leg, it seems so far apart, and it seems to not be there at all behind the cape. his hands and his head also seem abit small. apart from that and what jalonso mentioned, it's quite bitchin.

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Posted By: Aleiav
Date Posted: 27 April 2006 at 12:47am
It's an awesome start. Personally, I don't mind the pose. I actually like it. Something different besides 1,000 other buff guys in a "grrr" position. :P

I wanna see it colored!


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Posted By: kendi64
Date Posted: 27 April 2006 at 11:22am

Originally posted by Monkey 'o Doom

Well, I love it, but that pose seems really uncomfortable; no one stands with their legs 3 feet apart. and his body seems farther away than his legs.

I think I figured out what could be the problem with the "pose" and why he has his feet so far apart... he supposed to be holding a war axe, but didn't put it in yet because I wasn't sure if I wanted it in or I was thinking maybe it would be better to color then put in the axe if I like it. I was afraid the boot/leg was too big? And yes I was unsure of the plate above the boot, I'll have to even it out the spacing. If anyone wants can feel free to try to redo the bottom of the cape as his left side of the cape is pulled forward and his rightside of the cape been pulled back.



Posted By: Bifur
Date Posted: 27 April 2006 at 12:12pm
Originally posted by Aleiav

It's an awesome start. Personally, I don't mind the pose. I actually like it. Something different besides 1,000 other buff guys in a "grrr" position. :P

I wanna see it colored!

The problem I see with the pose it's not that he is not doing "grr" pose , it because if you wear a full gear like that you should have your movements too.. diminished to do that.
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Also i don't know why you didn't finish the cape in the left side , in the shoulders.


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Posted By: Aleiav
Date Posted: 29 April 2006 at 12:12pm
Originally posted by Bifur

Originally posted by Aleiav

It's an awesome start. Personally, I don't mind the pose. I actually like it. Something different besides 1,000 other buff guys in a "grrr" position. :P

I wanna see it colored!

The problem I see with the pose it's not that he is not doing "grr" pose , it because if you wear a full gear like that you should have your movements too.. diminished to do that.
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Too dimished to stand with your legs apart and tilt to the side slightly?


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Posted By: Skull
Date Posted: 29 April 2006 at 1:10pm
I think it looks great so far - Super dynamic pose.

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Posted By: Bifur
Date Posted: 29 April 2006 at 6:15pm
Originally posted by Aleiav

Originally posted by Bifur

Originally posted by Aleiav

It's an awesome start. Personally, I don't mind the pose. I actually like it. Something different besides 1,000 other buff guys in a "grrr" position. :P

I wanna see it colored!

The problem I see with the pose it's not that he is not doing "grr" pose , it because if you wear a full gear like that you should have your movements too.. diminished to do that.
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Too dimished to stand with your legs apart and tilt to the side slightly?

At least i think it would be hell unconfortable  , if he falls he'll not able to stand ( if he's not super human) so i would not risk xD


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I know! Leafs shouldn't make shadow...


Posted By: Aleiav
Date Posted: 30 April 2006 at 12:56am
aah... okie doke. I've never work a heavy metal suit of armor. 

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