Inmost (Metroidvania game WIP)
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Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 09 June 2026 at 8:38pm
Topic: Inmost (Metroidvania game WIP)
Posted By: Biuzer
Subject: Inmost (Metroidvania game WIP)
Date Posted: 03 June 2016 at 12:27pm
I am working on platformer game in monochromatic pixel art style. Just started the work and i need some critic :) There is no enemies yet 
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Posted By: drain
Date Posted: 06 June 2016 at 7:50pm
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Your pictures are a little squished and cannot be critiqued that effectively, because we can't any of the individual pixels.
Can you re-upload with a clearer definition? |
Posted By: Biuzer
Date Posted: 07 June 2016 at 1:02am
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drain Done.
And update with some lighting 
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Posted By: drain
Date Posted: 08 June 2016 at 6:05am
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They're a bit too big now, but yeah, it's fine now.
I really like how it looks! Nitpicks are the colours are too dull. Unless that was your intention, I would recommend hue-shifting your monochrome palette a bit. The vines/branches/tentacles do not read well because they blend in too much with other game elements, incorporating an outline to them would be a good way to remedy this. |
Posted By: Yuran
Date Posted: 09 June 2016 at 8:49pm
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You can liven up space - placing all sorts of flying animated dust particles. You can add more animated objects (moving web, small animals - rats, bats, spiders, a cloud of fog and so on). This will look just phenomenal :) |
Posted By: saulc12
Date Posted: 15 June 2016 at 8:29am
| That looks tremendous, really good choice of shades and some very nice lighting effects going on - excellent work. |
Posted By: Biuzer
Date Posted: 03 July 2016 at 9:21am
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Posted By: Biuzer
Date Posted: 06 July 2016 at 4:45am
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