Need some feedback on Black Prince
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Category: Pixel Art
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Printed Date: 12 September 2025 at 4:44pm
Topic: Need some feedback on Black Prince
Posted By: Alex Greentown
Subject: Need some feedback on Black Prince
Date Posted: 07 February 2017 at 10:25am
Hi guys, I see that I must improve this image, but I dont see what. Please write your feedback. |
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Posted By: eishiya
Date Posted: 07 February 2017 at 11:14am
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I don't like the mixing of pixel scales between the font and the rest of the art. The stains on the paper look blocky because they're build up of largely rectangular clusters. I think some refinement there would be nice. I'm also not sure they need to be quite so blurry/smooth, stains in books are often fairly sharp (but faint). The characters are a bit hard to read against the background because their values are so similar. Maybe make the colours on their clothing lighter, so that they stand out against the dark background. |