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Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
URL: https://pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=25824
Printed Date: 12 September 2025 at 4:46pm
Topic: slime banner
Posted By: skeddles
Subject: slime banner
Date Posted: 25 June 2017 at 7:55am
tell me any way to make it better ------------- |
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Posted By: Hapiel
Date Posted: 25 June 2017 at 8:15am
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Yo Skeddles! You can fix that slime shape! It's more gel than slime, but also it has a corner in the top left, a corner in the base plate, and overall doesn't read very soft and squishy. It gets softer if it would get slightly wider at the base, being hardly able to support it's own weight. The base thing suggests a slightly top down view, yet the face suggests a side view... Maybe draw a couple slime monsters by hand on paper to figure out how a smooth slime should look and behave? What's with the star highlight on the slime? A single sparkle? Texture is smooth and soft, not with extreme point highlights! The inner AA on the lineart has a weird effect on the line thickness. Correct this by making the line thicker on the non AA part or thinner on the AA parts. And I suppose the background and the text isn't finished yet? |
Posted By: skeddles
Date Posted: 25 June 2017 at 8:58am
I'm regressing.... I think I just dont have the skills to shade this... ------------- |
Posted By: skeddles
Date Posted: 25 June 2017 at 9:13am
dragon is coming out a lot better  ------------- |
Posted By: Quake
Date Posted: 25 June 2017 at 10:20am
Perhaps some inspiration?
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Posted By: skeddles
Date Posted: 25 June 2017 at 2:40pm
replaced slime with imp: /  finished dragon:  ------------- |
Posted By: Quake
Date Posted: 27 June 2017 at 7:22am
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I like them both.
I'd potentially make the snout of the dragon more abrupt/distinctive, but that's me. |
Posted By: WreX
Date Posted: 06 July 2017 at 7:26pm
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nice dragon and imp i think you should make what you wanted firstplace tho
try untill you got it this way you will not have problem with slime next time this is how you learn different things at the end you will be self confident that you can make almost anything you want |
Posted By: skeddles
Date Posted: 30 July 2017 at 12:43pm
 goblin 2:  3:  4:  ------------- |