WIP (Slime)
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
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Printed Date: 12 September 2025 at 4:44pm
Topic: WIP (Slime)
Posted By: kerv01
Subject: WIP (Slime)
Date Posted: 02 August 2017 at 6:08pm
This is my very first gif, im pretty new to pixel art so im working with few colors, what do you think guys about this slime??, some advice would be cool! ~Thanks for your time~ |
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Posted By: Yuran
Date Posted: 03 August 2017 at 12:47pm
| Extraordinary slaim, What does he do? Does he want to eat somebody? :) |
Posted By: kerv01
Date Posted: 03 August 2017 at 9:35pm
| Hi Yuran! thanks, jajaj, mm it is more like going to do something :P (like in ready stance), just there happy of life xD. |
Posted By: kerv01
Date Posted: 06 August 2017 at 3:24pm
Ok now i have done this, what you guys think about it?, it is just supposed to jump :P, advices would be great about it, thanks!. P.D.:(sry for bad english) |
Posted By: eishiya
Date Posted: 06 August 2017 at 4:00pm
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I think it's strange for a slime to be shedding parts of its body like that, especially with no apparent sign of those bits coming back into the body. Looks more like a lifeless droplet of some fluid. |
Posted By: kerv01
Date Posted: 06 August 2017 at 4:56pm
i added two frames how it looks like now? >_ou... :x |
Posted By: Yuran
Date Posted: 06 August 2017 at 8:57pm
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I advise you to add more frames where the animation of the slime is too sharp :)
For example, add frames where the slam wakes its round shape. (my english bad too) |
Posted By: kerv01
Date Posted: 06 August 2017 at 10:29pm
How about now? o.o |
Posted By: Yuran
Date Posted: 07 August 2017 at 2:34am
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So, I corrected the jerky frames and timings of your work. Look what I changed, but do not copy my actions. Try to find for yourself mistakes and roughness in the animation, do not be lazy to study other people's work.
my>  <yours
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Posted By: kerv01
Date Posted: 08 August 2017 at 9:22pm
| oh no my intentions are not to copy work, i want to be able to develop my own style, ohh thanks for the advice :D!! your slime looks more real D:!!! |