Big Iso City [finished]
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Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 12 September 2025 at 4:44pm
Topic: Big Iso City [finished]
Posted By: Aleiav
Subject: Big Iso City [finished]
Date Posted: 17 July 2006 at 11:29am
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Weeel it looks like it's not going to be a commission after all. *le sigh* ah well. Thanks for the crits all. :) |
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Posted By: Lawrence
Date Posted: 17 July 2006 at 11:38am
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Looks pretty nice so far. I especially like the texture on the trees. Iso cities are always cool, this one looks great so far.  ------------- |
Posted By: Propergander
Date Posted: 17 July 2006 at 2:53pm
| The park looks awesome, but you need to keep everything in proportion. The bench looks like it's the same size as the door. |
Posted By: Aleiav
Date Posted: 17 July 2006 at 2:58pm
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oops XD *runs to edit the bench* edit: Fixed. :D ------------- |
Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 17 July 2006 at 10:07pm
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Scale is the most important part of iso cities. Seems you have several scales atm.
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Posted By: Skull
Date Posted: 18 July 2006 at 2:48am
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Great so far.. The Colours seem a tad off to me.. I don't know why.
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Posted By: Psychotic_Carp
Date Posted: 18 July 2006 at 5:40am
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If you want the buildings to look more cohesive then they all should have the same look, I mean old style briks or newer glass and steel buildings -------------  got game?
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Posted By: Aleiav
Date Posted: 18 July 2006 at 9:50am
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nods, thanks for the crits all. @ jal: yeah, I was looking at the buildings today and some of them are really huge for the sort of small people that would be roaming the city if I had people. @ skull: I agree. This is why I stick to greyscale. I suck at choosing colors. >_< But, practice, practice, practice. @ psychotic_carp: nods, indeed. point taken. The more I look at the photo labs building, the more I absolutely hate it. I think it throws off everything and it's much too large. Hopefully I'll be doing a lot more today to make this look better. Wish me lucks! I shall be updating soon. ------------- |
Posted By: Aleiav
Date Posted: 18 July 2006 at 2:11pm
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large update!
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Posted By: Psychotic_Carp
Date Posted: 18 July 2006 at 7:40pm
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Its looking A lot better now, but hwy did you make the tubes behind the sighn 90°?
kthnxbye noob...  ------------- got game?
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Posted By: Lawrence
Date Posted: 18 July 2006 at 8:01pm
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Originally posted by Psychotic_Carp Its looking A lot better now, but hwy did you make the tubes behind the sighn 90°? kthnxbye noob... You never know, they could be sloping downwards. ------------- |
Posted By: iSTVAN
Date Posted: 18 July 2006 at 11:50pm
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The grass is too busy at the moment, if you ask me. Simplify it so it doesn't distract so much from the image. ------------- Listen to what the flower people say... 
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Posted By: Aleiav
Date Posted: 20 July 2006 at 2:33pm
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Thanks for the crits everyone. :) @ Carp: my attempts at making it differently didn't look very well at all. It always ended up looking choppy. If you can make an edit, be my guest. @iSTVAN: duelly noted and fixed. I'm not sure if this grass tile is better or not. ------------- |
Posted By: Buzz
Date Posted: 20 July 2006 at 2:57pm
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I like the desaturated verson much better. ------------- http://www.gmclans.com/forums/index.php?showuser=300"> 
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Posted By: Psychotic_Carp
Date Posted: 20 July 2006 at 10:02pm
? ------------- got game?
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Posted By: Aleiav
Date Posted: 21 July 2006 at 10:49pm
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I took it down since I was pulling myself to do it in the first place and it's not going to be a commission so I'd rather move on.
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